rate_review Reviews

Wow I really enjoyed reading the two chapters that you have of this story. It is a shame that it looks like this hasn't been updated in a few years. I would have really liked to see this story continue. 

Please update the story soon.

I was hoping for a story where she had female Pokemon, I know you have to throw some guys in there to cater to male readers' homosexual interests but still stories using male Pokemon are so many and generic that it's like some factory is pumping these things out. The only noticeable differences between these stories is which rules of grammar each author can't figure out.

Grammar could definitely use some work, as well as basic sentence structure, but you've got a good thing going so far :o

It becomes a bit of a chore to read when it goes from great writing to suddenly spitting in the face of all English grammar.

Your tags only indicate F/F content, but the Bulbasaur participating in the sex is male. Please adjust the tags so that others expecting a nice F/F story will not suffer the same unpleasant surprise that I have.

Was your '.' key broken? Your punctuation makes it really hard to read...