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Alistair acting all kingly would make any hot blooded woman swoon. :)

I really like your Alistair. But then again, what's not to like? ;)

Haha! Rori knows how to get what she wants, and not just with Alistair! Too funny. Alistair must find his armor quite uncomfortable these days lol. I wonder if Jowan would survive the joining? He would probably cheer Avernus up though lol. Poor Alistair is all mixed up about their new kinky fetishes. As long as Rori doesn't give the poor guy an aneurysm, it's ok, right?
Anyway, great chapter! I'm not a fan of DA2 either, especially the fact that all of your endings have some level of moral ambiguity. I like good, happy endings if I choose to do them. I actually haven't played it, so I looked up what I needed to try to fill out the Dragon Keep online for Inquisition. Definitely so that when you play it! The default world is ok, but they made Alistair king married to Anora and the female warden died. No mention of a romance, but I love Alistair and refuse to see him marry Anora. She's a not nice word. But the Keep makes Inquisition more real for you and how you played. It goes through every major choice and the fates of everyone in your group. I am replaying Origins at the same time as Inquisition though. My husband and I trade off which game we are playing lol. Looking forward to next chapter!

This really is a very good story. One thing I request is for Alistair to learn about GIVING oral sex. I think you could make that interesting.;)

I'm glad you enjoyed my review. I try to let the author know how much their story is appreciated and enjoyed. It always makes me sad to see stories with thousands of hits, but either no reviews or very few. Reviews are the only reward authors get for fanfiction. If someone truly enjoys a fanfiction and wants the long ones continued, the least they could do is leave a nice word. Or even some constructive criticism if they need it. That's all. How hard is it to simply say "love it!"? Some people live completely by texting anymore, so a simple, happy note should be no hindrance. Small rant over, lol. Alistair is definitely still my favorite, but I have come to love quite a few characters. I actually haven't found any that I despise, but I have never picked to have Loghain join my group. Fanfictions for things like these games are even more amazing because it is all based on how the author progresses the hero, gives them history, and fills in the missing places. I love the humor, and I really do believe Alistair would be an amazing king. I wish I could give him the cheese shield from Inquisition lol. Looking forward to more! Great job on the new chapters!

I love this story so much! Alistair was always my favorite in Origins, and I miss having him around in Inquisition. I hope you haven't finished writing this yet. I've laughed so many times. Uncontrollably. And gotten strange looks from my husband. And reading about my favorite game characters in a story is just amazing. I think you capture their romance perfectly, especially considering it all depends on the character you create to interact with the others. It really is such a sweet romance. I constantly find myself laughing or smiling when I read an interaction I actually witnessed while playing, and I try to guess if others I am not familiar with are in the game. I really hope Alistair and Rori end up together with their happily ever after. My first play through broke my heart because I made Alistair king and he broke up with my little elf mage. So sad. But I discovered the perfect way to play through for Alistair and my warden. I am actually working on that game now to import for Inquisition. Apparently, you can support Anora, execute Loghain, and live happily ever after with Alistair (after the dark ritual) while rebuilding the Grey Wardens. Along with all the other good decisions lol. I love Rori; she and Alistair are perfectly matched. I really hope they get their happy ending. I hope all is well for you and that you can continue writing! Best wishes, and Merry Christmas! Or Happy Whatever Holiday You Prefer!

The more I read this, the more I like it. Your warden and your version of Alistair are very entertaining. There are moments written so perfectly humorous, it's amazing. I feel like the story is really hitting it's stride now. I look forward to reading your next chapter. :)