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June 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I think the Great Oak's timing could have been better. If Rori really is pregnant, that's going to put a wrinkle in the fight with the Arch-Demon.O_o
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June 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Did you just write what I think you wrote? Either I'm very mistaken, or I just saw some heavy (or rather, soon to be heavy, If You Know What I Mean) foreshadowing.
Obligatory "loved it" here. Sounds rude but it isn't meant like that. You're story is something I look forward too, I'm always excited to see a new chapter up. This was no different, especially since I really liked the Landsmeet in the game, so I'm anxious to see how you portray it.
Sincerely, a fan from the start. :D
Obligatory "loved it" here. Sounds rude but it isn't meant like that. You're story is something I look forward too, I'm always excited to see a new chapter up. This was no different, especially since I really liked the Landsmeet in the game, so I'm anxious to see how you portray it.
Sincerely, a fan from the start. :D
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May 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Woo-hoo, human Rori is back, and some more naked fun. I'm quite liking how Alistair is written, and Rori's not-so-serious attitude as well.(the HN in my --unpublished--stories is with Alistair as well, but outside of party relations, she's very serious and even a bit of an Angry Young Woman). Keep writing, this is one of the only stories I check every day just to see if there's more.^_^
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May 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD <3
I've just read all the 15 pendant chapters I had.
I love love love this, and the fact that Rori became a werewolf.
You described her behavior so good that I need to draw her <3
expect a ton of fan art dear <3
pleeeease keep writing!
I've just read all the 15 pendant chapters I had.
I love love love this, and the fact that Rori became a werewolf.
You described her behavior so good that I need to draw her <3
expect a ton of fan art dear <3
pleeeease keep writing!
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April 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Just keeps getting better and better I'm absolutely enamored with this story I've finished my replay through of dragon age origins makes me wish you had been a writer for the games story can't wait for the next chapter werewolf rori=amazeing. Yours a loyal reader
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April 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Well, perhaps I should have said if you turn her into a werewolf PERMANENTLY. You shall not be flogged at this time.^_^
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April 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
While I'm relatively certain you're not going to turn Rori into a werewolf(if you do, I shall flog you with a loaf of French bread), the 'nearness' of it just makes me wish it could have happened in the game.
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April 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
O-ho! Nice wrinkle, bitten Rori. I don't review as much as I should, but I read everything. Very well done story so far.^_^
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April 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
When I finished DA:O for the thousandth time, I missed Alistair like crazy. I had a wild affair with Cullen, but he was just a rebound guy, and in the end I knew I was not over Alistair at all.
And then i stumbled upon Pooka's fic, and I got much better :)
Thank you for providing my kinda-twice-a-week Alistair fix, he's perfect and exactly as I pictured him and just as ̶c̶u̶t̶e manly as hell !:D
And then i stumbled upon Pooka's fic, and I got much better :)
Thank you for providing my kinda-twice-a-week Alistair fix, he's perfect and exactly as I pictured him and just as ̶c̶u̶t̶e manly as hell !:D
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April 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow. You're doing a really great job expanding the world of dragon age. I think you've fairly nailed all of the characters, especially Alistair. My favorite thing about your story is the humor, every time Alistair thinks "DOOM!" or Wynne says "Language!" or Barkley the mabari does anything cute or someone says "licking a lamppost" I grin uncontrollably. Zevran deepthroating the control rod was a stroke of comic genius. Truly exceptional fanfic, 9/10. My only complaint is grammatical sloppiness, otherwise i would be giving you 10/10. I hope you'll keep writing when this story is done.