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Damn dude, that sounds like quite the party! It certainly contains alot of the humour you've already showed throughout the story, just very condensed. We do might have to see how it all went the way it did!

I really thought the confrontation with Cauthrien was good, it was really tense, I honestly didn't know if it was going to come to blows, so a very good job on the suspense there. The cliffhanger makes me sad though. :(

I had sent you an e-mail by the way, in case you hadn't seen. I'm also preparing myself for what will undoubtebly be a very intense political battle!

I died of laughter at the strip tease bit this is why I read this fanfiction great blend of serious sexy and funny

Thank god for updating, I was craving a new chapter!
Great chapter, though there is something somewhat dubious about Rori drinking alcohol whilst in her…condition.
I did like what you did with Amethyne though, giving her so much more closure. I always felt bad about that, especially when, possibly thanks to your Warden. Iona dies for definite.
This story is coming to a wrap. It's kinda hard to fathom. I makes me wonder wether or not you will continue into Awakening or maybe even Inquisition? And might I also ask what you thought of Iquisition, as you said you got it for Christmas?

Cheers, Myron.

Thanx for replying to me I.appreciate it and that was one weird ass ending you pulled out right then your story's great and the best part it's actually close to being finished most people lose their steam and quit before getting half-way but you keep pushing and continue to let out quality work

I think i see where your going with this story and im gonna note that the archdemons soul only goes into a baby if it was conceived right before it was killed iv looked up the morrigan info for inquisition and she can have a son without the archdemmons soul if you had sex with her but didnt do the ritual so that woudnt work unless your planning another isabela situation

I also have a feeling that this pregnancy is gonna get revealed before the landsmeat gets announced alistair and rori rile together alistair dies against the archdemon.and rori becomes queen by herself random dark ending that popped into my head

Sad the stories nearing it's end happy to have found it in the first place keep the chapters coming and don't die I couldn't bare an incomplete story

Oh. My. God.
I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!!!!
I have been so far behind with school. I just so happen to have thought "hhmm, wonder how much has been added?" Then, poof, almost 20 chapters more!
You are so amazing! I think you are really Alistair and are just lying to all of us. I cannot even count how many times I have just started laughing hysterically, and my husband asks me what is so funny. This story is just so amazing, and sweet, and funny.
Gingersnaps will forever be the best werewolf dver. I loved what you did with that part of the story. When it got to the final conversation with the tree, I was so happy that he made it possible for them to have children some day. Then Rori started to be excessively tired. Then the on and off seasickness and nausea. And finally the bigger, heavier boobs. I have been internally screaming "she's pregnant!" for the last like 10 chapters lol. I think it will help them become king and queen, but it will make fighting hard for them. But it has me curious, will her being pregnant change the dark ritual to save the Grey Warden from dieing?
I love this story so much. I am looking forward to the next one! Great job!
P.S.
Great job to the amazing artist people constantly bringing us amazing story fanart! So beautiful. And some naughty lol.

Urgh. I suspected with the way Alistair was acting in the past couple of chapters, but now I know for sure you've been reading Fifty Shades of Grey. Sorry, this was fun when it was entirely an original work but I have to admit to losing a bit of respect for your creativity and hard work when I read the line, "good point, well made". Please please don't emulate others in your writing, especially if you think it's what other people want. I really was enjoying your work up to this point and it's made me sad to realise that this, like a lot of other fan faction work has been compromised by what amounts as a ridiculous fad.

Stay true to yourself and your writing style.

This is one of the best DA fanfic I ever read! I absolutely love your writing style, especially your characterization of Alistair. Rori is a very interesting protagonist and I love the awkward and humorous situations that regularly pop up. Keep up the good work!