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November 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Well... that was a trip. To me though, it doesn't feel near completed. I need to know more of what happens after and what happened during. I mean, I'm fairly certain Rori lost the baby considering the bleeding and the stomach injury, which depresses me, but without a sort of epilogue... guess I'm waiting chomping at the bit for the sequel, right?
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October 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I see the finish line! And what a ride its been, very very very well done.^_^
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October 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, the final battle begins!! I'm not sure, but I still think you have something up your sleeve with the whole Archdemon-pregnancy thing. Guess we will find out soon! Poor Alistair and his worst days list. That would be a hard list to swallow. I'm glad Rori showed up with exactly what he needed. Knife, blanket, cheese, drink, and Rori. Oh, and his mother's amulet. The scene with his Grey Warden necklace on the boat and Morrigan was actually kind of sweet. And no, just because of what happened with Morrigan doesn't mean he can't continue his other plans.
The scene in the tent was too damn funny, but I think the mushrooms beat it. That was the perfect comedic relief for the whole "we may be doomed, but fight anyway!" thing. Alistair really makes a great king, as long as Rori isn't stoned out of her head and ruining his epic speeches!
Great job! I'm so looking forward to next chapter and the final battle. Best wishes!
The scene in the tent was too damn funny, but I think the mushrooms beat it. That was the perfect comedic relief for the whole "we may be doomed, but fight anyway!" thing. Alistair really makes a great king, as long as Rori isn't stoned out of her head and ruining his epic speeches!
Great job! I'm so looking forward to next chapter and the final battle. Best wishes!
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October 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow. And here my game only showed Morrigan crawling up Alistair on the bed in a room in Red cliffie in their small clothes. How do I get this version now?
Poor Alistair and Rori. I think mostly Alistair. I believe he would have rather slept with Wynne, maybe even Zevran, before having anything to do with Morrigan. Technically, they lied a little. Rori said he would only get laid. I guess she thought blood ritual and cutting might have freaked him out. Again, wow! You went all out with that scene! You easily could have led Alistair to Morrigan and then jumped to afterward back in his tent. Was any of that in the books, or was that all from your wicked imagination? I'm guessing number two; you are brilliant. I don't know if it made it harder on Rori, but at least she was involved, sort of. Oh, I just accidentally made a pun! Lol. Made it harder, I guess that was the point.
I understand Rori not telling Alistair, or anyone really, about the baby. As much as they all care about Rori, no one would let her fight. Morrigan would probably rather she was not having Alistair's baby, but I don't think she wants anything bad to happen to Rori. I like Morrigan. But I like Alistair more. I guess it's time for final battle next. Then, she can let the cat out of the bag.
Great chapter! I'm looking forward to the next one! Hope everything is going good for you! Best wishes!
Poor Alistair and Rori. I think mostly Alistair. I believe he would have rather slept with Wynne, maybe even Zevran, before having anything to do with Morrigan. Technically, they lied a little. Rori said he would only get laid. I guess she thought blood ritual and cutting might have freaked him out. Again, wow! You went all out with that scene! You easily could have led Alistair to Morrigan and then jumped to afterward back in his tent. Was any of that in the books, or was that all from your wicked imagination? I'm guessing number two; you are brilliant. I don't know if it made it harder on Rori, but at least she was involved, sort of. Oh, I just accidentally made a pun! Lol. Made it harder, I guess that was the point.
I understand Rori not telling Alistair, or anyone really, about the baby. As much as they all care about Rori, no one would let her fight. Morrigan would probably rather she was not having Alistair's baby, but I don't think she wants anything bad to happen to Rori. I like Morrigan. But I like Alistair more. I guess it's time for final battle next. Then, she can let the cat out of the bag.
Great chapter! I'm looking forward to the next one! Hope everything is going good for you! Best wishes!
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October 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Cat's out of bag! Well sorta. It is for Rori and Morrigan. Morrigan trying to kill the baby is a bit disappointing, but I could see her doing that if she believes it justifiable. I'm glad Rori didn't drink it. I would have cried.
Isn't that usually how things work? You leave to go where you need to, just to find out you have to go back where you just came from with not enough time. Apparently, the Archdemon missed his invitation and is having his own party at the same time.
Wow, Alistair and Rori have the WORST luck when it comes to their intimate moments lol. Caught with the hand in the cookie jar. Cookie jar being each other's nudey bits that is lol. I think I would crawl into a hole and die. Especially after realizing said hand was stuck in the naughty place. Yikes. At least Alistair got a new decoration out of it. I'm sure that bracelet really brightens up the place!
And now, after marching an entire army as fast as possible on a normally 4 day trip, they find out that someone is going to die to finish this. Yeah, that was kinda crappy news. And if you don't complete the dark ritual with the scary lady, Alistair will not let you sacrifice yourself! Have to leave him at the gate to get that ending. Hopefully, Morrigan let's Rori know that her baby will take the soul instead.
Hopefully, that was the last evil cliffie until the Archdemon dies. Torture! But I'm excited for the battle. Mostly to see where you take us this time. Keep up the amazing work! Best wishes!
Isn't that usually how things work? You leave to go where you need to, just to find out you have to go back where you just came from with not enough time. Apparently, the Archdemon missed his invitation and is having his own party at the same time.
Wow, Alistair and Rori have the WORST luck when it comes to their intimate moments lol. Caught with the hand in the cookie jar. Cookie jar being each other's nudey bits that is lol. I think I would crawl into a hole and die. Especially after realizing said hand was stuck in the naughty place. Yikes. At least Alistair got a new decoration out of it. I'm sure that bracelet really brightens up the place!
And now, after marching an entire army as fast as possible on a normally 4 day trip, they find out that someone is going to die to finish this. Yeah, that was kinda crappy news. And if you don't complete the dark ritual with the scary lady, Alistair will not let you sacrifice yourself! Have to leave him at the gate to get that ending. Hopefully, Morrigan let's Rori know that her baby will take the soul instead.
Hopefully, that was the last evil cliffie until the Archdemon dies. Torture! But I'm excited for the battle. Mostly to see where you take us this time. Keep up the amazing work! Best wishes!
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October 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
RE: Chapter 95
The plot thickens! Heh heh heh.
The plot thickens! Heh heh heh.
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September 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! I have been checking every day for a new chapter! Very cute! I'm glad they finally got past that horribleness. Is it evil of me to wish that Anora goes through the same thing Rori did? I don't want it to happen, but I want her to be slightly traumatized as well. It would serve her right. I am glad that Alistair locked her up. He us definitely not the type to just execute someone without a real reason. Though Anora dieing doesn't really bother me at all. Lol.
Alistair is a great king, even if he is just now realizing it. Rori made the best decision without just being able to be grey wardens only again.
Hopefully, they find out she is pregnant soon. I could see it causing a problem with the final battle though. The knowledge of it I mean. I don't see Rori wanting to risk their baby, and I know Alistair would not want her even anywhere remotely close by. But everyone would work to protect her even more. I don't know! I will just have to see what you have cooking in your wicked mind when the ttime comes! ;)
Great chapter! Looking forward to the next one. Yes, I will be checking everyday just like I have since I started reading this story, but I'm patient I promise. Hope everything is well for you! Until next time.
Alistair is a great king, even if he is just now realizing it. Rori made the best decision without just being able to be grey wardens only again.
Hopefully, they find out she is pregnant soon. I could see it causing a problem with the final battle though. The knowledge of it I mean. I don't see Rori wanting to risk their baby, and I know Alistair would not want her even anywhere remotely close by. But everyone would work to protect her even more. I don't know! I will just have to see what you have cooking in your wicked mind when the ttime comes! ;)
Great chapter! Looking forward to the next one. Yes, I will be checking everyday just like I have since I started reading this story, but I'm patient I promise. Hope everything is well for you! Until next time.
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September 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
And there it is!! King Alistair and Queen Rori! Wonder how everyone will react when they find out about Rori's "condition". And I wonder just how much trouble Alistair is in. Maybe he will be tied up and spanked lol. I never liked Loghain or Anora. I very much liked your landsmeet. Especially the kilts lol. That was pretty awesome. Ooh, and the beheading. Can't have a landsmeet without a good old fashioned beheading. I'm looking forward to what you have coming next. :)
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August 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Maker-damned cliffhangers…
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August 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Nice! I totally agree. If that story doesn't come out, I will forever be haunted by all the laughs I could have had and the unanswered questions. Number one: I wonder which one of them thought up the matching butt tattoos, or if it was just Zevran taking advantage of the situation. Lol.
Anyway, the chapter was awesome. I loved the "Loghain could be a grey warden, Anora queen, and Alistair beheaded joke. I don't think I will ever be able to do that in any of my playthroughs no matter how many times I do. I think it was a kinda twisted idea. And why has Rori not told Wynne yet about her throwing up? For all they know, something could be wrong with her. But it's ok; I know it's coming lol.
Great job! Looking forward to next chapter! Bah!!
Anyway, the chapter was awesome. I loved the "Loghain could be a grey warden, Anora queen, and Alistair beheaded joke. I don't think I will ever be able to do that in any of my playthroughs no matter how many times I do. I think it was a kinda twisted idea. And why has Rori not told Wynne yet about her throwing up? For all they know, something could be wrong with her. But it's ok; I know it's coming lol.
Great job! Looking forward to next chapter! Bah!!