rate_review Reviews

I wish I had something with a lot of depth to write but I don't. This story is really sexy and I've enjoyed it a lot so far. It's right up my alley, really. It'd be nice if it wasn't a world totally without males, but it's still good.

Also, I saw your mention about having an f-list account! I'd love to RP with you! I don't know how to message on this site though, I just registered specifically to talk to you.

Whoa. I expected rapey stuff, but death and gore?? Damn...the story suddenly took a dark turn. Still looks interesting, who is behind this incident though?

Well, I just finised reading chapter 3... Rosa has a little bit of an incest fetish.... Nice.... I dont know why but in fanfics and stuff, incest is pretty good if its done right.... Like in a Ben 10 fic i read on xnxx.com... I liked the incest-liking Rosa and the domination. That was really hot. Keep up the good work!

Cool :3 Thanks for answering my question.

And they already meet Sabrina? Wouldn't have thought her for one to own a club.

Nice ;) One question, do the pokemon evolve the normal way too?

Also, do we get to see what happen when some pokemon do manage to captured humans? Like a side story with side characters?

I love he concept and I'm loving whats happened so far, twice a month is sadly a long time to wait, but I hope to see more soon, Great work

While this story is pretty well written it seems to be dulled down by the huge amounts of purple prose, we practically got an entire tour of professor Oak's lab which makes little sense as by the next chapter it most likely wont be mentoned again and even if it is that much detail still isn't necessary. I really enjoyed the sex at the end, but that was mostly because it didn't have an entire sentence just describing the smell of pyra's cock. It was as it should have been, quite simplistic but still provided enough detail to be erotic

My friend...you just hit a jackpot...hottest story i've read in a while, please, keep it coming :)