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Man that was a great chapter. Awesome story, awesome scene and of course awesome writing. Can wait for another chapter. Please continue, at this point, I'll read anything you write.

Any plans to continue the story after you finish it. Looks like waste to stop it in my opinion.. Just saying...

When do you plan to update the story?
I want to see more stuff happened :D

Man this is one good story. Perfect balance between sex and story. Character are fun and sexy. Ironicly I like Sabrina and Gabriella. I agree with what some people mention that You should include Bunny's sister Straight in to mix as Bunny's gift from max to be taken care of as little pet. I was so annoyed when she started to bully poor Bunny. Give her feel of her own medicine. Will you move the story to morrowind or maybe daggerfall lands. So far with all set I think you could just make more and more adventures.

Well I just finish reading last chapter and just notice that you soon plan to end the story... The first thing that passed my mind was when will there be a sequel to this... Maybe go on current land inside of ES world....
From all female characters so far I like Sabrina and Gabriella the most, would be nice to make them alpha status between girls. Sabrina looks like is the favorite so far and she dose have surten skills to allow her to take that place on top.
Gabriella as much as her "status" is' she is still to first to meet him and all. She might be sub to max but kinda think should be more... Well for better word more on "top of the food chain". :)
Svetlana is fine as it is, i like how her personality is and Anya is still not all told so far. Seems that Svetlana might bring her "under her protection" or between her lower part... If base on Svetlana comment on "half a chance" in chapter 24
The only one so far that kinda give me feel that something is lacking is Bunny. Would be cool if you could put her sister in their little group to make a full set. Like collectors edition for Max. I think two of them would have some interesting moments if Max got straight arrow as a "gift" to bunny as only option not to kill her if they get her in future. Sister pair would look fun considering that it seems that Bunny's sister was a bit of bully to her. Change of rolls would be in teresting to see.

I hope you will not stop writing the story and continue to develop the plot and adventures of this characters as they go around ES world.

Dont mess around with me!!!! Finally story arc?!?!?!? No.... Just NO... There is SOOO much you can do go in to character story's how things gone. Fix some issues they have. You can use Their past that fought up to them or something. Sabrina's bast would be prime example of some conflicts or life they lives so far like Bunny's problem. Add her sister in the mix for start point as zeo mention I don't know plenty of stuff to do before say finally arc. Maybe got to members old homes or go current part of elder scrolls. xD

Nice story. Hope there will be more updated in near future.

Cool story so far, any chance you could make more updates?
Keep up the good work.

Wow! I'm amazed so little people reveiwed your work. This story is amazing. It wll writen, exciting and deliciously good. The fight scenes in the story are very vivid as well as the lemons. Thank you for your story! Keep it up!!!😍

So.... this is awesome. I was thinking that maybe you could add a Redguard Dancer, Some orc-warrior trapgirl, and maybe a bosmer. you know, round out things for the group dynics. I mean you already have Anya, who you've implied to be a future party member already.