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August 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I love this story i wanted to see a what if maybe Max is a vampire lord and has the main cast of girls work under him as servents are slaves are something.
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August 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is awsome cant wait for the next waht if.
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August 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I like the idea with max and gabby as noble it sound awsome. :)
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August 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I liked the max and gabby noble idea you had maid stuff is always great i say go for it.
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August 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Hey there Samson just wanted to say really enjoyed your story don't know if your still taking request but i would like to see maybe Max has a position of power are something and he takes fujll advantage of it.
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August 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I would really like to see something to do with Bunny and her yummy little bubble butt. But otherwise all the other ideas are cool too.
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June 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM
That was bittersweet.
I actually remember that when Gabriella's name was revealed I thought "Oh, like the dark elf from DB. Weird". Nice to know that wasn't that coincidence. I'm also guessing Anya is Niranye. Never gonna be able to look at either the same way again. Definitely made me care more about the DB questline. Now you've got me wondering about the the other characters, but I'm 90% sure the rest are pure OCs rather then weird OC/Canon Character hybrids.
Amazingly well written, kind of sad to see it end. Excited to see what kind of work you plan for the future.
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June 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Wow. What an awsome read this has been.the journey has come to a close. As for the what if options, maybe make an end were max becomes a vamp with sabrina? Just a thought. Anyways amazing story.
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April 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM
U have been reading this story since the beginning, and i love it. The sex scenes are the best, but the overall plot is good too. Please do extra bonus sex scenes as well, i cant believe mire people havent reviewed
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January 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
It's about time!!! I've been waiting for months for an update. Though you forgot about us. As always, your writing style is fantastic, it like I can see exactly what is going on between Max and his ladies. Can't wait until the next update. AND WHERE'S THE SEXY TIMES!!! I think Anya needs a little punishment for almost getting the spotted and killed. Thanks again for the update. Keep them coming.
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