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God that was hot.  Pun intended ;-3

Please do more with Rui some day

IBTS

Both Rui and May using their tits to fuck Blaziken's cock. I was kinda iffy on this, since it involves a Pokemon, but my girlfriend absolutely loved it. Good job!

Damn... that was hot ( pun intended >:] ).

Was legal nudity in the Orre deserts something you had planned for in 'heat in the shadows',
If so then I feel sorry for wes & rui to have to see the fatass mayor naked XD.

I must preface my review by saying that I really do enjoy your stories. But, not every woman has big asses and fat tits. In fact, Iris and Leaf seems to be the only girls in all of your stories that have a different body type. The biggest offender on this one, I think, might actually be Misty. She's a swimmer. A professional one, you might even say. Yet every time she shows up she had a huge ass and big fat titties. Swimmers just aren't built that way! Have you seen any pictures of professional female Swimmers? They're very lean bodied with lots of sleek, sexy muscle, not voluptuous. You gotta start branching out in your body types,man, it's getting repetitive.

Not bad. Actually, this was a really fine piece of work you had set up.
Can't say that I'd react the same as May did to having someone show up right in my face. They'd probably have their lights punched out.
And the idea of an ice-cream vendor seeing a Blaziekn show up ready to pay was actually one of the more enjoyable parts of the fic. I can almost see it.

The only issue seems to be that you're missing periods (.) question marks (?) and Exclamation Points (!). What's funny about it is that the story is set up to almost act like they should be there, they just...aren't. It's like those keys are broken.

Pretty good lemon. A bit on the short side though, and wasn't really what I expected...but it was good and you did have tit-fucking...though I wished there was more, but aw well. Maybe a little more build-up would had been nice.

But I love this. Make no mistake.