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by sillyneko345

person dc
schedule August 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hahahaha, a ticklish, skinny teen Daxter pile-glomped by a group of horny ottsels! Or just Jak. Ahhh, Daxter, you're soo easy to embarrass in a good way.
person Angie
schedule August 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really, really, really like this story. Why hasn't anybody ever thought of doing a Jak ottsel story? OMG, why hasn't anybody done a story where everybody are naturally ottsel a and when Dax falls into Eco he comes out as an elf/human? That would be EPIC!!!!LoL
person Kuromei
schedule August 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Aw, yeah. Getting Jak back in action! Just what the boy needs right now. Well, in addition to "special attention" from his friends, I mean. ;) But does this mean we'll see some Dark Ottsel action soon? If anything's going to push him that far, it'll be Dax getting nommed on by Metalheads...

Squee! I can't wait! XD
person Skunktail
schedule August 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
its still looking very good :3 Jak has to get an ottsel sized blaster!
person rockenrosy
schedule August 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Loved this story. Cannot wait for another chapter. Jak and Daxter ottsel exterminators. LoL
person GMB
schedule July 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Supper cuteness. Keira can be such a bitch. You'd think she was the stupid blonde, though Tess is far from stupid. She seems to know more than the boys do. ;)
person rusl
schedule July 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love the progression of this story it just feels right. And this is one of the few stories that I enjoy reading multiple times. I hope you continue this story its one of my favorite jack and daxter stores.
schedule July 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
its looking good so far, you should be paid to write these full time
person Katie
schedule July 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Tripple the cuteness!!!!! I'm having a cuteness overload! Hehehe.....
person Kageko
schedule July 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I dredged ao3, aff, and even ffn, for all the good stories - I ditched ffn after the purge, oh so long ago, and have been mostly avoiding it since. Jak is on the brain, though.

And while I don't usually read furry or bi, I'm still greatly enjoying this. :D Poor Jak needs love. For and if reason, he consistently reminds me of a big, sad dog, with big, watery eyes, who can snap and bite at any moment, but only because he's been treated so awfully.

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