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June 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Lesbian Shokan Sex For The Win Five!
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June 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Normally I dont review stories. Makes me paranoid someone I know will find out im a complete degenerate.
But because this is probably the only story I have ever seen in which Sheeva is a woman and doesn't have a massive penis attached to her, i would like to offer support the the kind author.
I like the story a lot. Its quite enjoyable, although, personally I would like to see more focus on Sheeva then Sonya. I am, after all, a degenerate who is into 4 armed dragon ladies.
Someone else mentioned more detail in the sex scenes, and i tend to agree. But aside from that, i hope you keep up the good work.
The only real way you could make this story better for me (and I am, of course, just one man) would be to include something foot fetish related with Sheeva. Her feet are... Im into that.
That and more power. More dominance. More of Sheeva as the Master.
(Oh...and not killing Cage...Hes my favorite...)
But because this is probably the only story I have ever seen in which Sheeva is a woman and doesn't have a massive penis attached to her, i would like to offer support the the kind author.
I like the story a lot. Its quite enjoyable, although, personally I would like to see more focus on Sheeva then Sonya. I am, after all, a degenerate who is into 4 armed dragon ladies.
Someone else mentioned more detail in the sex scenes, and i tend to agree. But aside from that, i hope you keep up the good work.
The only real way you could make this story better for me (and I am, of course, just one man) would be to include something foot fetish related with Sheeva. Her feet are... Im into that.
That and more power. More dominance. More of Sheeva as the Master.
(Oh...and not killing Cage...Hes my favorite...)
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June 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
dont usually sign in to the site to leave reviews, i like to stay hidden and direct things from the shadows like some eeeevil lesbian overlord lol, but i was gonna leave a review for witching hours too and i just wanna say before i do that, that a multi-part sheeva x sonya story is fucking great. i mean its happened before but its always had her as a futa, which, since im not attracted to penises, is not my thing at all. i like how its going so far, could have a little more attention to the sex but theres nothing wrong with it, but overall im enjoying it. ive been reading the reviews and ur responses to them, first of all ill say that im with theo on the foot thing, i loev me some f/f foot worship/sex! secondly, im saddened by the fact that it will become futa after chapter 8, because honestly how many several-chapters-long f/f stories nowadays are there that don't eventually devolve into futa? its fucking inescapable!!! but i do respect that this is a request fic and u made a comittement to somebody about it so i can accept that and just be thankful for the amazing gift of 7 chapters of f/f goodness. anyhways i like this a lot keep up the good work, and make that corruption of sonya sexy, delicious, and deep!
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June 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
you are doing a wonderful job of writing this, please do continue :)