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August 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
oh :D I like this story a lot. I can't wait to see what else happens.
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July 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I like the story, I do hope you continue it! It's very hot, love the idea of Sonya getting high off Shokan pheromones and falling in love (?) Cool take on dub-con. Also Sheeva's hot as eff gurl
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July 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Liking this story a lot.
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July 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great chap 4! I appreciated the references to Sonya's body hair, stubble and dream muff. Would also enjoy Sheeva playing with Sonya's hairy armpit. Good sex scenes, I like the way Sonya is being trained. I hope all ends happily with this pair. Looking forward to next chap!
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July 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. I look forward to reading more, but I hope that Sheeva will give in and let Sonya use those thighs on some deserving victim soon (even if it isn't Kano).
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July 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
i like how sonya is getting proper trained in this chapter
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July 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You want my review that badly? Fine. I don't like anal stuff. Most women don't. Dildos are like cocks: they aren't the big main event that men think they are and that this chapter's making them out to be. Tongues, fingers, certain other toys, there are lots of other, more dextrous methods of pleasure that are much more enjoyable. I've even had a halfway skilled set of toes do more for me than half the dildos and three quarters of the dicks I've had before. Your writing is good but your narrative perspective seems less and less like the women you're writing. I like this story and I'm still reading it, but a large portion of this chapter is disappointing and does nothing for me.
I'd have just shut up and let you do your thing, but you wanted a review, so there it is. Sorry. Sometimes it's nicer for your readers to hold their tongues.
I'd have just shut up and let you do your thing, but you wanted a review, so there it is. Sorry. Sometimes it's nicer for your readers to hold their tongues.
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July 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This just keeps getting more and more delicious. Looking forward to the next part!
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July 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Chap3, very good! Sexy stuff. Hope to read more soon. With fisting. Hopefully Sheeva will make a good pet of Sonya.
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July 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Looks like these bitches need a man to give'em a good dicking. Don't listen to any of these pretentious, deluded little dykes in the other reviews, no matter what she wants to believe every woman wants a man to fuck them, they're never going to be happy and satisfied without it. Next chapter, have one of the MK men come in and show that whore Sheeva her place. It doesn't matter which guy, any of them will do, even that wuss Stryker can automatically out-fuck both of them.