rate_review Reviews

good fic man keep going the doing sex is good

I'm Still Reading It And Enjoying It But I Don't Usually Feel The Need To Comment Every Single Chapter Five!

Enjoying the hotness. I like seeing Sonya pierced and tamed. Hoping for more fisting and domination.

I like most of the story, very sexy. I don't like the rape scene here. It's not as blatantly manipulative and unnecessary as most stories' rape scenes are, but a wise writer once told me that, when writing stories, rape is the clumsy hammer that a better writer casts aside in favor of more subtle tools. "Save the girl from rape" is a tired, unimaginative, trite, and honestly very offensive cliche in fanfiction, being used as a crude way of emotionally uniting two characters (the victim/almost-victim and the rescuer) when the writer lacks the creativity and skill to forge and prove that emotional bond through real means. And the fact that it's used so casually, that this vile and horrible act that scars the psyche is a thoughtless go-to device for fic writers...it's really disturbing. It's disappointing to see it here, because you're good enough to do better.

Good to see chap5. A few word errors. Not my favorite chap, mostly just gory, but I enjoyed seeing Sonya getting dommed. Looking forward to kicking (hopefully that refers to penetration with a foot) though your comment after that leaves me puzzled.
Hoping for more soon.

I haven't read a story by JD that I haven't enjoyed. This is no exception. Hope theres more coming soon. Keep up the good work.

If you don't release the next chapter soon, I'm going to rip your spine out of your ass and then whip you with it.

oh :D I like this story a lot. I can't wait to see what else happens.

I like the story, I do hope you continue it! It's very hot, love the idea of Sonya getting high off Shokan pheromones and falling in love (?) Cool take on dub-con. Also Sheeva's hot as eff gurl

Liking this story a lot.