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for Citadel: The Party

by Hyperion

person ilego123
schedule April 14, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Hope u continue

person Skelo
schedule December 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love the paragon options mate! Just let the switch be private; crew must not notice the difference lol :P
schedule August 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
My cover for Your story
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person Granith
schedule June 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
An unexpected twist on the citadel dlc. I like it.
person Sakreh
schedule June 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I liked both the renegade ending and the beginning of the paragon path! Talk about how a little wind can change the course of destiny :D

My only regret is that I wished to explicitly see more of the sexual torture that the girls suffered in hands of Cerberus...

(like "Liara suffered everything from her asshole being raped so much a krogan could fit his fist through it, to a diet of the clone's semen for breakfast, lunch and dinner everyday"...----- seriously, how is this not a scene? :D :D )

Maybe scenes when the girls woke up, realized their situation and the cerberus specialists started to "question" them... There were two moments during the Ashley chapter where Liara and Miranda screamed out from the neighboring chambers... I think I'd like to see what the Cerberus goons were doing to them at that time - to the filthy alien and the traitor :D Would you consider a little spin-off? :-)

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You know, in a way, the paragon path is more humiliating to the girls, since they will now willingly submit to the clone...

I look forward to the next chapter... especially since I liked the forced anal sex between the Clone and Kasumi in the renegade path. It will be fun to watch her take it willingly this time :D
schedule June 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well, the renegade ending was dark. I was not happy with you killing Shepard but I recognize that was needed for the set-up. Overall a good story, would have liked longer and more sex with Samara; I love the idea of her oath being used against her. Overall good. Hope to enjoy the paragon path more.