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Aoba would've done well to mention this side of him before dating Koujaku, lol! "Oh, by the way...I have something of an alter-ego who's kinda violent and likes extreme excitement and stimulation. You don't mind that, do you?" But really...the descriptions that Aoba and Sly each gave of their wants was heartbreaking and the first thing I could think was "As if a normal relationship with a person isn't already difficult, you now have to cope with a second entity that's completely different from the person you're in love with." How exhaustive...

Okay, loved that ending for that chapter. Please tell me this isn't done yet ^_^ After the games failed me, I have been waiting for a dominate Aoba. He did say (in Ren's route) that he was tired of being the "girl" in the relationship, lol!

I actually like that Noiz allowed himself to become Koujaku's punching bag, even for a tiny moment, to allow Koujaku to get out his frustration. Scared and horrified Aoba always makes me think of the terrified look on his face during Virus and Trip's routes (especially Re:connect). That look makes me want to pull him away from whatever danger he's faced with and then punch someone in the face, lol.

Anywho, all of this is to say that this is a really great story so far, great job with the descriptions and the emotions.

I loved this. It is really well written and I can totally believe this is what the characters will do. I don't know if you plan to make more, but I am very eager to see what happens next!