rate_review Reviews

Oh my God what the fuck did a zoophile write this?!?!?!

Honestly this is one of the best Tomb Raider fictions I've read in a very long time. The character of Lara I have to say was treated fairly well and the development between her and Jennifer was believable. As I personal preference I chose to follow the more magical route and was thoroughly pleased at the end result. That being said however I am said to see the end of this particular fiction and was hoping for more. Perhaps if the author feels up to it they could create a sequel focusing on Sam and the black chick, from 2013's reboot, going out to find Lara and eventually joining in the depraved but very sexy lifestyle. If such a sequel were to occur I would happily and voraciously read it.

Although the story did not take the path I would have preferred, it was well written and often sexy. Glad for the happy, slutty ending.

Came for the sex, staid for the plot. c];{~

Smut light is tots fine. Plot progression is welcome. My personal opinion would've been to lock down a path. A or B, doesn't matter, as long as it serves the overarching story. Still, good dialogue, I liked the tension building, although Lara's initial capture and her escape seemed just a hair truncated.

I do hope you haven't stopped this story.O_o

I had quit this but I noticed a new chap so I checked out `Alpha'. Good chap, I'm glad you got back to these girls being pack-bitches rather then lesbians with wolf sex-toys. Good to see some proper canine dominance.

For those who have no idea what it is to write these osrts of stories, let me help educate you. Most writers start these stories as one-shots, with no desire to take them further, and no idea where to go. When an author asks for input it isn't because they are lazy, or taking the 'easy way out,' it is because they have no idea what the readers who asked for the fic to go beyond that first chapter want.
S is just trying to figure out what those who wanted him to continue want to read him write. As for as the double chapters that rad so close to one another... the man has said it too many times, so let me, "For those wanting to read a story of Lara being pregnant, read the chapters marked 'B'." He has done all he needs to regarding his responsability to the readers wanting either one or the other. If you want both? read both... don't bitch about how he does it.
If you want it to differ significantly, try this: Have Lara give birth to her litter, and tend them. Honestly, that is the only time this should differ.
Let me say to you 'S', Great job so far, and let it roll off if someone wants to piss on your work. You have huge brass nadgers to even write this, and great talent. I say this, and your Lara would agree: "This is the dogs."
B.

`All to Myself'. Pretty sexy. nice to see Lara being dommed, even a little bit. Hope to see more. Some fisting would be hot. Put Lara in her place.

Amazing!!!!