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February 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great ending to an excellent story. You did such an amazing job with this and I'm eagerly awaiting your next story!
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February 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter, it was awesome how shephard almost lost it with liara, you did a great job describing the utter confusion/rage that comes with horrible news/realizations. I also liked how miranda had a little victory in exposing liara, a good finish to my favorite character. Keep up the amazing work
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February 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure why I'm enjoying this, but the story is good, and so is every scene. This is also the best Miranda/Jack I've ever read. Well done!
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February 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing; nice work! I'm guess that, from the tone of the story so far, Miranda's story is not ending on a pleasant note... But I hope she at least manages to ruin Liara without Oriana getting hurt. Who knows? CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER :D
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February 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
It's such a great story, i say don't end it here, make it a happy end Miranda has gone through too much to deserve anything less i. This one.
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January 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This story is getting better and better, man I love your other stories but this one is looking to beat them. Keep up the good work! :D
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January 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ah, the turn. Well I will bow out now before things get even worse.
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January 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
It`s an interesting "What if?" this. I remember at the end of LotSB, Liara says that having a purpose will keep her honest. Well this is pretty much "what if the power did corrupt Liara?" Apparently she becomes a supervillain. Like I said an interesting take. I like it.
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January 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Now that there is an awesome chapter... Can't wait to see where this goes, it's gonna get worse and worse for her, or is she gonna manage to turn things around! AHHHHHHHHHHHHH :D
excellent job seriously, ten outta ten
excellent job seriously, ten outta ten
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January 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I realized after my last review that you were the author who...let's just say dealt very harshly with Liara in a previous fic (for the sake of spoiling others). I have no idea why you would like Miranda and hate Liara, but I'll read this for now and hope for some more Miranda suffering. The sex with Jack though was way too pleasant so I may be disappointed.