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February 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow NOM. Your output went way up. Lots of new chapters up.
Some pretty interesting developments took place too. Really interesting how Brooks continues to refer to the Original as Shepard while Liara has started calling the clone by that name. Quite a contrast.
Shepard and Liara making plans. It sounds good. But knowing your stories; things are certain to go horribly wrong.
Keep writing. I plan to keep reading. This is quality stuff!
Some pretty interesting developments took place too. Really interesting how Brooks continues to refer to the Original as Shepard while Liara has started calling the clone by that name. Quite a contrast.
Shepard and Liara making plans. It sounds good. But knowing your stories; things are certain to go horribly wrong.
Keep writing. I plan to keep reading. This is quality stuff!
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February 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I dont know if you will ever read this, but can you please have more shepherd? i dont understand why you suddenly just stopped, the ashley thing was pretty good, the brooks scenes were amazing because it was the only thing with shepherd, kasumi and jacob were pretty good i guess, the whole jack thing i hated until recently with the whole virginity thing ( even though it was barely a few sentences long ), can you bring back shepherd please
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January 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Incredible story! Is it weird that I want more of Morgan + Ashley? Morgan is such a weirdo, I love it! Keep her up!
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January 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
What you've done to Shepherd is OFFENSIVE. Seriously. You bastardize everything that was good and memorable about the character. Good about the game. You should be disgusted with yourself for this poorly conceived and badly written TRASH that PISSES on one of my FAVORITE game series. FUCK. YOU.
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January 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for new chapter. Cerberus sure is devious to re-involve Jack in all of this.
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January 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Most of your stories have been really good. Arguably the best Mass Effect stories on this shit.
I just read chapter 22. And I enjoyed this chapter quite a bit. Mainly because some Shepard was featured. Everything is really well written. But it seems like there hasn't been enough Shepard so far. I don't like Ashley or Kelly nearly as much so I find myself not as interested in their stories.
Keep up the good work dude.
I just read chapter 22. And I enjoyed this chapter quite a bit. Mainly because some Shepard was featured. Everything is really well written. But it seems like there hasn't been enough Shepard so far. I don't like Ashley or Kelly nearly as much so I find myself not as interested in their stories.
Keep up the good work dude.
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January 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Another thing I like is the feud between Brooks and the fake Shepard. Nice plot point. Curious to find out where you are going with this.
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January 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Calling it right now. The Cerberus Mole is a Double Agent.
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December 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well you've given Cerberus a really good Kick the Dog Moment (not that it needed any more).
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November 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
When this is over, the Cerberus will be purged.