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for The Alleys of Lumiose City

by JustS

person verifiaman
schedule December 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I have some ideas. if youre still here my email address is verifiaman@yahoo.com
person MASigma
schedule November 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter, was nice to see somewhat see the reverse of the situation of the previous chapter in this one. Since you seem curious about ideas, I figured I might offer some of my own suggestions... not that I don't mind Pokephelia of course, but you seem to be wanting ideas of possible trainers that can have some fun. Since it's in Lumiose City, I would love to see perhaps see some fun with the Furisode girls of the Sushi High Roller restaurant, mostly so the one that wears black if you don't want to involve them all, lol. As for some fun with Serena, the Two Flare Grunts at the Cafe could run into her in the alleys and either beat her or take her by surprise and double team her... eh, I could come up with some more if I think on it, these are just off the top of my head. Anyways, looking forward to whatever you come up with next though.
person MASigma
schedule November 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yes! A Serena lemon at last... and a naughty one at that. Always been a fan of a girl being unable to pay up the full cash amount gives their male opposition the right to push them into some nice naughty sex... will be curious to see if there ends up being more to this as I'd love to see poor Serena end up doing more naughty things in back alleys.