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Excellent work on the latest chapter, which I think is the best one yet. I especially liked Miranda's final... resistance? Not sure it's the right word for it, but that part was really well done. The confrontation between Shepard and Liara was interesting, but I really can't say anymore about that scene without knowing the outcome (nice cliffhanger, I guess). The love scene was once again good, but at that point I was much more concerned about Miranda's fate so I kinda rushed through it this time.

Nice new chapter, good to see Zaeed and Jack on board! Also, know that I really appreciated the reply ;) Keep up the good work!

I admit I was about to stop reading this because by part 5 the whole story just became way too cruel for me. I was feeling bad just by reading it... But the love scene at the end was so well done and I was really happy for Miranda even though it was later revealed that scumbag Shepard was just playing with her.
Also, after reading the ceremony scene I'm now pretty sure that you managed to portray Miranda as the perfect/ideal woman in this story.
I'm really curious about what kind of team Ashley and Leng are going to build. I was having ME2-style band of badasses vibes when they were talking about it. I expect a very capable team.
So I'm looking forward to what happens next and hope for a good ending for Miranda.

Hmmm, chap 6. I am stating to get a hopeful for Miranda vibe...which is not good. Still hoping she and Ash end up slaves together. Also hoping for some Tali molesting.

Glad to see more chaps. I can't get enough of humiliated Miranda. I hope she does not get rescued but ends up a loyal pet.

Interesting start. I'm eager to hear more about Liara and Shepard and I'm looking forward to Shep molesting Tali. I like her as an obedient sub. Miranda getting raped is a plus in any story. Hope to read more.