rate_review Reviews

Nice to see this story is still going! Definitely hope to see more.
Also, I'd love to see a "special appearance" by Palutena, either helping Samus dominating Pit, or by submitting to her alongside her captain...
Anyway, it's your story, so it's your call. Great nonetheless.
Keep up the good work.

Luigi out.

Why the hell would Samus settle for Pit when she could have Palutena?

I hope there be some gentle and perhaps teasing ass play in future chapters/shorts. Maybe even some pegging. Taking Pit to the height of male ecstasy with his full trust seems like the kind of thing this Samus would enjoy.

Your story, so it is your show, I'll be a fan with or without Pit experiencing continuous sweet release due to Samus' probing, massaging fingers and/or toys.

Been a great read so far, I like how Samus, while leading events (and the relationship?) is going at a pace that is enrapturing Pit, teasing, yet fulfilling simultaneously.

I'm most definitely looking forward to seeing where this will go. Maybe I'm just romantic, but I hope that what Samus and Pit have will develop into something long term.

MOAR! Dang I was hoping to read something like this one day.

this is a pretty good story.

Can't wait for more!!

Love it. Love all of your stories, definitely going to add you to my recommended authors! Plz plz second chapter soon, love the dominance between Samus and Pit.