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by Fanfictionfan360

schedule January 14, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This sounds kinda dangerous; I mean, Misty has no way to breathe underwater. Besides that one fact, I quote enjoyed this story. Keep up the good work!

schedule August 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
even though misty may have been able to hold her breath that long while holding still, when she was engaged in such rigorous activity, she would have run out of oxygen faster. But am I trying to bring realism into one of your stories? Hell no. Awesome as always m8. Nice to see another poke bang ;)
JMAHWK
schedule August 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ah sweet sweet brutality.
schedule August 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
well that was very interesting. wasn't expecting an underwater lemon