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I have to say, I did not see that coming. I thought that she would be more subtle about her power to keep it hidden. the chapter before just did not click for me, so no review, but I am still here! looking forward to more sex!

I generally suck at writing reviews but I just wanted to say that I've really enjoyed your story thus far and I'm eagerly looking forward for each new chapter :)

I'm a fan. I like booker even though he's scum more for what he could be.

So, at first I thought it was against my better judgment to leave a review (whatever reason that may be). But then, as your chapters came one by one by one, as you managed to get me to return again and again and as you surpassed my expectations time and time again, I found that I had no choice but admit that *not* leaving a review was against my better judgment all along. Your words were immaculate, your prose tactful and concise, and most of all you have the patience that I lack. Because of this, your characters, be they yours or not, truly, and actually, grow.

I will now, however, *not* dispense with the usual reader rave: More, and soon. They sound perilously erotic, but they have to be said. Keep up the good work!

I have been waiting for this chapter! Something I was thinking about. In Bioshock, Booker seemed only a few years older than Elizabeth was. The game is kinda confusing, but didn't Booker go forward in time to get the very start of the game? That would make them pretty close in age. I wish you had finished the scene with Reed and the two hookers. Looking forward to more!

I hate to say this but I didn't like chapter 3 at all, it was boring me to the point that I couldn't finish it. There are just too many new characters without any kind of decent set up, you started jumping around scene after scene some going by so quickly that I wondered why they were even scenes to begin with. I mean how did Eliabeth get a job like that so easily? That's something that should have been shown instead of just saying 'she got a job' and that's all we really get.

Plus with so many OCs in this story it's too hard to keep track of who is who, I don't even remember the names of the people from the previous chapters who he owes money too because they didn't have any names that could stick with you or weren't really built up to the point that I would care for them. I honestly thought they were throw away characters. So then you add in all of the others with no background or build up and...well I started getting lost. I came for a Booker/Elisabeth story and it seems to be moving away from that.I think my interest in the story is gone at this point.

It just felt like you were rushing through (especially at the start) and taking the focus away too much from the main characters by this point in the story without any decent characters that we would care for (hero or villain types) that can carry the story on their own.

Love where your going with this, the action is as good as the sex and plot. Keep up the good work!

I think the guy above me is being stupid. Forgetting who people are is his problem, not your, and unnecessary details are unnecessary. I would prefer to see mostly Booker and Elisabeth for the sex, but do what you want, not what other people want

I feel like it's probably been a very long time since Noah went after anyone truly dangerous. I wonder if his cavalier attitude will hold when confronted with Booker's resourcefulness.
I'm enjoying the story a lot.

I am pleasantly surprised with how well you have captured the characters and created the world that they live in. I am a little surprised with how timid you made Booker with killing people as he had no problem with doing it in the game but I can see why you are doing it. But I love the characters, great writing style, and great romance. Keep it up