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for Hold That Pose

by DrkVrtx

schedule January 31, 2021 at 12:00 AM

...Repeat the same session as Round 1.

Oh and that POV story is currently amazing, as it details more of the sex and the narrative it gives in each pleasure we give to Tina... <)

schedule January 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I like it. The details about the character, the idea of the story and that ending makes this a fantasy all can enjoy. Perhaps maybe we'll see some of the other DOA females in a scenario like this one? I hope so.
person Dave
schedule April 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Will this have a next chapter? The writing and explanation was superb and it would be to get in interaction with a goddess like Tina Armstrong.
schedule October 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well...that was insane in an awesome way.

Just what caused all that, and how did it become undone?
person qwerty
schedule July 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It took another read through, but now I see how good this fic is. Well-executed POV and the bit at the end with Tina's actual participation elevates this -- in a way.

Another good fic from you. Hopefully, we'll keep on reading more from you soon.
person JViper
schedule July 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved this story! I don't like the reader insert type of stories as they usually don't capture what I'd do in such occasions and read really bad. But this one I liked a lot. Maybe it's because it has one of the best girls in DOA and I really like Tina. My only complaint is the lack of action from her until the very end. This fic is already hot but it would be hotter with Tina being an active part of it. Hope to see more!