rate_review Reviews

Great story so far! Loving how your changing a fair bit of the main storyline from the game. I would like to see a bit more of the missions but if you keep going lime this then I'll be happy enough. But for FUCKS sake! Get Tali some with shep SOON before she does something she'll regret! Id love to see a nice long Intimate moment with them right before tali jumps shep in blind lust!

it was a Defendant it Reminds me of The male Asari story but with a Left Field twist .

Chap 19, pretty sexy, but...You need to stop flipping whose on top. D/S relationships follow an established hierarchy. I can handle Shepard being topped by Aria, but this Ashley/Jack thing needs to stop flipping. I was happy to see Ashley putting Jack in her place, then you flip it again! Please put Jack on the bottom and keep her there.
Hopefully Amy is not gonna die. I would think the Reapers designed her genes to stop her aging at adulthood and then she would get cybered if they still had her. A self-replicating weapon is very much in keeping with their strategy.

An army of Shepards both Human and Asari... sounds like the Clone Wars all over again.

Chap 17.. Good stuff. So nice to see Jack raped and knocked up.

Pregnant Jack seems like an interesting but odd fetish.
Nothing wrong with that though.

Well, nobody ever said Jack was smart.

I'm loving every dam second of this story, and I'm seeing trouble in the form of a futa!jack for Oriana if she stays in that Cerberus uniform.

another great chapter! :D I can't wait to see what happens next and I hope you put Samara in a chapter soon...I'd love to see how that turned out lol. She is my favorite team mate aside from Kasumi. :)

Mostly enjoyed chap 13, but Shepard is no one's bitch. She should have been the one pounding Jack.