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by Narg

person BOB
schedule May 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is a really fun story to read do you plan on continuing it?
person Anon
schedule December 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
excellent story,

as you put it in starcraft I assume that Kerrigan will win, and I really hope that she does, cause let's face it, she is way above the others.

keep writing.
person Anon
schedule July 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
##Buffy 6” Faith 6.5”##
How did Buffy lose a full inch and how did faith not lose anything?

##Also, you have been rewarded with an extra half inch to compensate for what you lost sucking off the golem.##
Cersi idlely stroked her golden cock. Oh yes. She could make good use of this.
##Cersi 6”, Daenerys 5”##
WOuldn't it be 6.5?
person a1993
schedule July 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
at this rate kerrigans gonna win, guess thats why it was an SC story. Makes me wonder what she will do with her wish... could be anything from killing mengsk to taking raynor or anything
person Valen
schedule June 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely love this story :)

I like the new quests and beastie, it will give some more momentum. Also, what happened to the 'achievments'? That was a great idea.
schedule June 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It's spelled "Cersei."
person rakasur
schedule June 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Very good story.
I like the scene with Kerrigan and also the couple Buffy/Faith.
I also like Samus, I hope see her more dominant.
I like the scene of end for the chapter two with Daenerys's revenge.
person Nathan
schedule June 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is probably one of the best fanfictions I have ever read. You have a real talent for this. More chapters coming soon?
schedule June 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM

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BronxWench,

AFF Archive Moderator

schedule June 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome. I insist that you continue and finish it. Its very refreshing for a good read that doesn't have awkward lines and proper paragraph & grammar.