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January 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Short and succinct, each paragraph surprisingly gets the job done. Interesting way of approaching the idea mentioned in the AN, would definitely say it worked out well.
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June 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! Really entertaining and well written.
The one with Sumia was so beautiful u.u
The one with Sumia was so beautiful u.u
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June 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Very well done I have to say. The little paragraphs a short sweet and to the point and really leave the rest open to imagination while beautifully showing everything that needs to be said. After reading both chapters I'm really hoping you would do a second run of this style only this time as the female avatar.
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May 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great stuff. Even if many scenes left me wanting more, that's kind of a compliment in and of itself, and the hyper-compressed nature of these was definitely intriguing and kept things fresh. Kind of reminded me of something like 22 Short Films About Springfield. I'd like to see more.
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May 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nice little vignettes. Are you going to do the second generation as well?
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May 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I actually found this to be very entertaining :) I can't wait for the children's part.