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July 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This bloodthirsty new Shepard you've created is fantastic! I just can't wait to see what's in store for later. I find it difficult she'll be too fond of Udina's shit, or take too kindly to the Collectors trying to kill her.
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June 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
good story lol some real funny parts . her lust is well her lust . keep up the story .
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May 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter, and I concur with the previous reviewers, I want Ashley to join shep, would be totally awesome if Ashley was made in the same mould as shep was.
do try to take less time next time will you? or will that lower the quality of your writing? if it does then keep writing just as you have.
do try to take less time next time will you? or will that lower the quality of your writing? if it does then keep writing just as you have.
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May 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe... I just can't stop snickering while reading this story. I just love it. I have the destinct feeling there will be no political bullshit in this story (which, of course, means more shit gets fuck up!). I can't wait to see the next chapter, which I have a sneaking suspicion will have F/F/M in it. Can't wait to see who gets fucked nex- I mean what happens next!
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May 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
ashley. she needs it
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May 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awesome second chapter!
Can we expect Ashley to get in on the action any time soon?
Can we expect Ashley to get in on the action any time soon?
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May 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Interesting beginning, I look forward for more. ;)
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May 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
well this is interesting, if you manage to keep up to the shep you have created this should be real good.
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May 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
DAMN... I LOVE THIS ONE!!
UPDATE SOON!
UPDATE SOON!
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May 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please do keep this up! Might want to write slightly longer chapters in the future though.