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Oh. OHHH. This explains a few things. I owe you an apology for being so vitriolic. It all just seemed so really out-of-character and to be such a big plot hole for all of Hyrule to just go along with the big bad that everybody knew from History was the evil traitorous wizard Ganondorf. But if Midna isn't actually DEAD, well this DOES provide quite a fascinating twist!

I can't believe you did it! You went this route! Even though it makes NO sense from ANY media he's been in, even though the SMART thing and the MORAL thing would be to flat out TELL everyone what Ganondorf did, even though there should be SPIRITS whom Link FREED who should be aiding him right now, even though Zelda's supposed to be a sorcerer, even though Link's allies and the races he befriended FAR outclass and outnumber ANYTHING Ganondorf could get hold of, even though there's NO reason why Ganondorf should still be alive consider Zant supposedly acted from beyond the grave to kill him, you went this route. I cannot believe how utterly you buttfucked the source material, disrespected the characters the fans of the game love most, and how you expect us to just go along with this. I. am. ashamed. of. you. And you should be ashamed of YOURSELF. You've failed as fan of the games, you've failed basic questions of logic and how stories are supposed to work, you have failed as a WRITER. What POSSIBLE decent justification could you have for this...THIS...UTTERLY IDIOTIC tale that makes NO sense once you actually stop and THINK about what's happened?

Another well written chapter

Such brutality, but so unflinching you can't stop reading. Really need to see what happens next!

For the love of GOD, don't let him get away with this! Having Midna die went against what actually happened in the story bad enough, along with Zelda SOMEHOW not having any magical powers whatsoever, which comes off as MAJORLY out of character. But the idea that they should get Ganondorf get away with being portrayed as this beneficent dictator is a LOAD. He's GANONDORF! EVERYBODY remembers that he tried to TAKE OVER THE WORLD! That he's a MURDERING SORCERER who CANNOT BE TRUSTED! They should publically announce he's got her kidnapped and raped her and have the kingdom rise up in revolt! He'd get tossed clean off his throne in a week!

Ohh nice depth. good plot. hope to see this wont end in the single digits.

You're not just gonna let that selfish tyrant get away with this, are you? Isn't Zelda supposed to be a wizard, why can't she just magic up a solution? i mean she created magical arrows that could turn Ganondorf in a PINCUSHION?!

Aww that was sweet! Good dick move on ganondorf

Well written and such intriguing premise, can't wait for more chapters.