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June 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Again, brilliant chapter. You really have a way of bringing balance to this scenario and nice subtlety in bringing Link and Ganon closer (after passage upon passage of Zelda/Ganondorf, I feel like the focus on the menage-a-trois should start to emerge or else this just gets reduced to yet another cuckold!Link story...separate from the herd man!). I'm hoping we get a Link/Ganondorf chapter soon, because (and this is no criticism on you) eventually the Zelda/Ganon dynamic, like all inner conflicts, will reach a point where there's just no meat left on the bone.
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June 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I hadn't ever considered all three of them together but I think it works perfectly. I like the progression, it feels very natural. I am hoping that Ganondorf and Link get closer and I am very interested to see how the relationship develops between the three of them. You have kept them all in character and the story is very well written. Well I have throughly enjoyed reading what you have so far and I am looking forward to what comes next.
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June 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I literally cannot get enough of this story. Ganondorf's treatment of Link and Zelda is like a hand closing over a flower. It's malicious and brilliant (and admittedly, it's nice to see Link no longer taking such a passive role) and that that last line in this chapter tells me Ganon wouldn't be very good at keeping a garden. Keep up the good work!
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June 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god...Ganondorf is just so deranged and I am enjoying every moment of it! I love when authors' seek the psychosexual interpretations of the triforce bearers (it always makes for such interesting reads), and this fic in particular is so tasteful and well-written concerning the subject matter. Bring on chapter 14!
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June 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
God, the tension in this story just keep getting wound taut enough to bruise. Literally salivating to know Ganondorf's plan...
Also, it's nice to see a little confidence return to your writing now, after what felt likes weeks worth of appealing to fan-headcases, so keep up the great work! After all, one of the great joys in reading fan fiction is to see refreshing takes on the property, not just regurgitation.
Also, it's nice to see a little confidence return to your writing now, after what felt likes weeks worth of appealing to fan-headcases, so keep up the great work! After all, one of the great joys in reading fan fiction is to see refreshing takes on the property, not just regurgitation.
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June 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You don't always have to face up to every criticism this story receives; give yourself time as an author to figure out where it needs to go, let YOUR message shine through. I think a lot of fanfic readers don't take enough of a step back when reading fan-works (which is an essential part of the process), and personally, I think what you're doing as a fanfic writer is ambitious and honest.
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June 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Each chapter is just so tense, like something balancing on the edge of shelf and threatening to spill.
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May 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm a bit conflicted about this story, I'll admit. It's not exactly bad to be honest: I appreciate the fact that it's well written and I mostly appreciate the fact the Zelda didn't become some simpering hentai maiden: in other words, she gets raped and BOOM! all of a sudden, she's 'in love with' or completely submissive to Ganondorf. So that's a plus, because it's done far,far too much in fan fictions where Zelda x Ganondorf couplings are involved.
However... I don't know. I almost wonder what or why Link is really...there for. It seems the story could work just as easily without him and Ganondorf hasn't really done or shown much of a reason to actually keep him alive. He's said one, sure, but I'm not seeing how Link being a general (when it's obvious how defiant he is and would jump at chance to get him and Zelda out of the situation) will really help: the people already trust him to a degree and Zelda is being forced to support him so the people will trust him further, he's made it obvious he won't kill Zelda yet and Link literally has failed in stopping him harming and/or raping her, and to top it off, he can obviously defeat Link easily and even turn him into his wolf form. So why is he bothering having him around? I mean Zelda even has her secondary purposes, what with the raping and such but Link is just seeming there for nothing more than moral support for Zelda. The story is obviously still going, so maybe we just haven't gotten there yet, so I'm not trying to be rude, but nine (one chapter is missing ^_^) and I'm like "Okay Link...make a daring escape, be forced to clean dishes, get raped, do a dance, do something other then fail at your job (saving Zelda and Hyrule) and comforting Zelda!" Lol.
I do admit, I too see it a bit of a stretch that Hyrule or even the civilzations around it, would trust Ganondorf at all, even with him so calling saving it from the Twilight Realm. More so if the sages are/were aware that's exactly where Gaonondorf did or could end up in, the Twilight Realm. I'm also shocked he hasn't tried to forced Zelda and Link to give up their Triforces, since that's always been more of his primary goal, and he wouldn't need either of them (well maybe Zelda as a sex slave apparently) if he got that. Ad now that I think anout it, if he could just stop and defeat Link and Zelda, why he wouldn't again, kill Link and Zelda (or Go-go sex enslavement for her I suppose) and just take over with his own power and magic. he's never really been one to show or feel he 'needs' the people's favor and easily apparently takeds over Hyrule, no problem. Maybe that's where a little of my confusion is coming in too: Ganondorf isn't completely OoC (you portray his personality quite well), but his reasoning and motivation seem a bit off here compared to how he usually is, even in Twilight Princess.
Now, to be fair to you, part of this is obvious artistic licenses and such, but it seems like a 'what if' continuation of TP, and even on that level, Ganondorf seems...off in his motives. A least to me anyway. But again to be fair, the story isn't done yet and there is still much to be covered. So want to give it more a chance because I do actually like it so far.
And again, I'm actually still quite interested in your story and want to see where exactly it's going: I'm interested to see where this stuff with Midna will go and to see if poor Link and Zelda can at least get some form of a one up going for themselves. Again, THANK YOU for portraying the whole rape thing with Zelda in a more compelling and likable fashion. Okay, I don't like her getting raped (lmao) but you make her reactions and overall scenes believable and don't degrade her characterization into hentai levels of WTH, so you already won on that mark.
Looking forward to more!
However... I don't know. I almost wonder what or why Link is really...there for. It seems the story could work just as easily without him and Ganondorf hasn't really done or shown much of a reason to actually keep him alive. He's said one, sure, but I'm not seeing how Link being a general (when it's obvious how defiant he is and would jump at chance to get him and Zelda out of the situation) will really help: the people already trust him to a degree and Zelda is being forced to support him so the people will trust him further, he's made it obvious he won't kill Zelda yet and Link literally has failed in stopping him harming and/or raping her, and to top it off, he can obviously defeat Link easily and even turn him into his wolf form. So why is he bothering having him around? I mean Zelda even has her secondary purposes, what with the raping and such but Link is just seeming there for nothing more than moral support for Zelda. The story is obviously still going, so maybe we just haven't gotten there yet, so I'm not trying to be rude, but nine (one chapter is missing ^_^) and I'm like "Okay Link...make a daring escape, be forced to clean dishes, get raped, do a dance, do something other then fail at your job (saving Zelda and Hyrule) and comforting Zelda!" Lol.
I do admit, I too see it a bit of a stretch that Hyrule or even the civilzations around it, would trust Ganondorf at all, even with him so calling saving it from the Twilight Realm. More so if the sages are/were aware that's exactly where Gaonondorf did or could end up in, the Twilight Realm. I'm also shocked he hasn't tried to forced Zelda and Link to give up their Triforces, since that's always been more of his primary goal, and he wouldn't need either of them (well maybe Zelda as a sex slave apparently) if he got that. Ad now that I think anout it, if he could just stop and defeat Link and Zelda, why he wouldn't again, kill Link and Zelda (or Go-go sex enslavement for her I suppose) and just take over with his own power and magic. he's never really been one to show or feel he 'needs' the people's favor and easily apparently takeds over Hyrule, no problem. Maybe that's where a little of my confusion is coming in too: Ganondorf isn't completely OoC (you portray his personality quite well), but his reasoning and motivation seem a bit off here compared to how he usually is, even in Twilight Princess.
Now, to be fair to you, part of this is obvious artistic licenses and such, but it seems like a 'what if' continuation of TP, and even on that level, Ganondorf seems...off in his motives. A least to me anyway. But again to be fair, the story isn't done yet and there is still much to be covered. So want to give it more a chance because I do actually like it so far.
And again, I'm actually still quite interested in your story and want to see where exactly it's going: I'm interested to see where this stuff with Midna will go and to see if poor Link and Zelda can at least get some form of a one up going for themselves. Again, THANK YOU for portraying the whole rape thing with Zelda in a more compelling and likable fashion. Okay, I don't like her getting raped (lmao) but you make her reactions and overall scenes believable and don't degrade her characterization into hentai levels of WTH, so you already won on that mark.
Looking forward to more!
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May 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
A midna that wants revenge on hyrule. if it wasnt for all that midna link fanfiction i'd probably see something like that. unfortunately it'd probably be as bad as the midna link fanfiction
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May 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This just keeps getting better with every chapter.