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August 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is super compelling! I like how there's a good balance of plot and sex, and both Zelda and Link gradually being won over to Ganondorf's side is intriguing and chilling. I have a new favorite Twilight Princess fic.
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August 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
And you'll update again pretty soon right?
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August 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh the Dionysian nature of this story is lush and deadly, like a rich poison mixed with a sweet wine. I can't wait to see where the smoke from the battlefields carries next, whether it be towards Ganondorf's chambers, his war-room or his tomb.
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August 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Can't wait for the next!
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July 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
ok just a few suggestions just cuz i love the story and want to read more. 1. I love link, he has been my hero crush since i was like 10, and everybody ends up humiliating him in their stories which i find completely unfair, so i suggest instead of ganon humiliating him it should be the other way around. or better yet just leave link alone hes been used enough with zelda (damn her using him just to escape the fucked up stuff ganon did to her.) which im not completely sure thats what she is doing so forgive me for jumping to conclusions. 2. if zelda IS using link i think he should get what he deserves in the end just cuz hes an all around good guy. Those being said i love the story line and the sex scenes with all the gory detail. keep up the good work!
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July 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The story is like watching an approaching storm and I am deliciously anxious for that first drop of rain.
Otherwise, kudos to the characterisation here, you really have a knack for making Link seem human, relatable. In most Zelda fanfiction, even though he's the hero of the series, I find writers have a hard time finding an authentic voice for him, and further cementing it; he's either overtly innocent teen or steadfast young man, but in Endgame, something new or better is working with Link (and to great effect!) without seeming trite or overdone. It's the same with Zelda, she's either generous princess or staunch royal, but here she's endearingly dispassionate and a perfect foil for Ganon's zealous tyrant/carnal older man and Link's eager warrior/pressure youth. But your Ganon, how I love your Ganon; affably evil, calculating, vicious. There's this looming threat that what he might do is worse than what he's already doing and I absolutely adore it
Bring on the next chapter!
Otherwise, kudos to the characterisation here, you really have a knack for making Link seem human, relatable. In most Zelda fanfiction, even though he's the hero of the series, I find writers have a hard time finding an authentic voice for him, and further cementing it; he's either overtly innocent teen or steadfast young man, but in Endgame, something new or better is working with Link (and to great effect!) without seeming trite or overdone. It's the same with Zelda, she's either generous princess or staunch royal, but here she's endearingly dispassionate and a perfect foil for Ganon's zealous tyrant/carnal older man and Link's eager warrior/pressure youth. But your Ganon, how I love your Ganon; affably evil, calculating, vicious. There's this looming threat that what he might do is worse than what he's already doing and I absolutely adore it
Bring on the next chapter!
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July 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow... that was a nice twist. blood magic. it continues to shock me that the porn site makes better fanfiction than the fanfiction site.
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July 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! This story is really good! I really hope you haven't abandoned it! Keep writing! Keep writing!
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July 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great! You updated! I'm very happy to see that you are continuing this story, I was worried that it was abandoned when I first started reading it. This is definitely one of the better stories that I've read on this site, you're a great writer and the concept is very intriging. I hope you decide to see it through to the end.
Even though I complained about how you were portraying Midna in my last review, I actually ended up liking how you portrayed her in this chapter. I guess I shouldn't have been so quick to judge! But I do see how she's acting and her personality as very plausable. So, great job! Was a very interesting chapter overall, I look forward to seeing how it all unfolds.
Keep up the good work! I hope you are able to update soon!:)
Even though I complained about how you were portraying Midna in my last review, I actually ended up liking how you portrayed her in this chapter. I guess I shouldn't have been so quick to judge! But I do see how she's acting and her personality as very plausable. So, great job! Was a very interesting chapter overall, I look forward to seeing how it all unfolds.
Keep up the good work! I hope you are able to update soon!:)
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July 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
this is an amazing story im glad i found it! i love the story line and the fact that its interesting, not just strait up porn. ive read all chapters in one night ha so keep writing i will be waiting for the next one.