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October 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Gotta say, I'm dissapointed with the cop out ending. Everything else was SOOOOOO good, but the ending was just kinda puked out and was there. I felt you could have done so many things with the nightmares bit, but in the end it turned into mindless sex. So, everything but the epilogue, I enjoyed, and in my eyes, this story, ain't over.
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July 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Question for the author: You have most certainly read an article called "The Message of Majora's Mask," or at least a shorter article about the Stone Tower Temple, posted online by a certain individual named Hylian Dan, haven't you? I like the way you incorporated some of the more popular theories (most of which arose in the aforementioned article) about Termina and The Stone Tower into this story. It's more than just an erotic fanfic, it is actually pretty deep as well. Good job.
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May 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well, I wasn't expecting it to turn out like that, but I can't exactly argue with that conclusion... Epilogue could have used something more though... Maybe being a bit further ahead, with one of the girls pregnant, maybe the other with a baby already. It felt more like an extra chapter than an epilogue, but maybe that's just me.
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May 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It is good to see you have not abandoned this story. You do well at characterization and editing; I praise your work. I hope to see more soon!
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May 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Interested in seeing where this goes, considering chapter three is a lemon where sex DOESN'T magically make all their problems go away... Wondering if the girls will be going to Ikana, or if the dangers from Ikana will be coming to them...
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May 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I was SO excited to see another story from you, especially a legend of Zelda one and especially especially one with Cremia and Romani, two characters who do not have enough stories.
I like the tension you've set up here with the two sisters being after the same man, how both sisters have their own insecurities regarding Link, their ages, and the world around them. Also the sex was pretty well done, but oh Link! Come on man you've defeated monsters who threatened entire worlds! You can handle this!
...maybe.
Looking forward to seeing more of this! Really want to see what kind of danger is lurking from Ikana.
I like the tension you've set up here with the two sisters being after the same man, how both sisters have their own insecurities regarding Link, their ages, and the world around them. Also the sex was pretty well done, but oh Link! Come on man you've defeated monsters who threatened entire worlds! You can handle this!
...maybe.
Looking forward to seeing more of this! Really want to see what kind of danger is lurking from Ikana.