rate_review Reviews

I love this story especially the ending because even though you didn't write it in you left the ending open with Liara winning the bet. could you make a few more chapters & include the sex scene or sex scenes between Liara & Ashley? Like they have sex in the shower or Liara takes Ashley to another part of the citadel or normandy & has sex with her? I think it would be cool if you could even have Shepard walk in on Liara & Ashley having sex like with Ashley being face down ass up? and i also think it would cool if you added to the story where Liara has secretly been taking Ashley to places on noveria or feros or even virmire when shepard left them on the ship & nobody knew about Liara & Ashley sneaking off the ship together on dates. 

Thank You I'm really interested in hearing back from you about these ideas.

This is so HAWT! More.

good story i enjoyed it a Lott please keep the story going .


Panther

I want more.. please <3

Now THIS is a fun story. Love Shepard and Liara's personalities and looking forward to seeing them play this out to the bitter (and fun) end. I'm just wondering how this is going to go though, cause despite the fact that this fic seems more on the humorous, sexy side I still worry that someone (like Ashly) might get hurt? That would certainly throw a wrench into the works.

Looking forward to more updates!

Oh man. This is really good so far. Loving it!

After reading some of your more serious work, this is refreshing. Nothing on the line, just simple fun. I like the plausible shift between Liara's personalities as well, it's all an elaborate ruse. Good work!

Also, whenever Liara or Shepard are on the hunt now,

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OQwA14YWdqA

I'll imagine them doing that. Kind of like this,

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=naIU8pvuseM