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for The Chosen One Unknown

by Britt_601

person Sonya
schedule August 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Whoo! Another good chapter. :) The siblings are about to have a chat. *runs around in circles in excitement*
And screw the people trying to tell you what to do with your story! If they don't like it, they can freakin' go read something else! D:<
person Sonya
schedule August 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'll wait as long as I have to. *continues to patiently wait* :D
schedule June 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
@Sonya

Oh absolutely not! It's just going throw a few tweaks and grammar fixes. I am not abandoning this story because I like it way too much to do so! Thank you for the support though, I'll work faster to get the rest of the story out!
person Sonya
schedule June 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This story hasn't been forgotten, right? D: I wanna know what's gonna happen next. :(
person Yui
schedule January 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Amazing, you bring up African culture and yet you have a Caucasian woman as you lead. Wow.
schedule January 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
@Yui

Not sure if you're being cynical or not, but I am well aware of that fact. Having cultures mixing is nothing new. There are Black cultures with White ancestors and White cultures with Black ancestors and everything else in between. I understand that this is a bit unorthodox but I'm sticking to the way this story is written. If this is not your cup of tea then maybe you can check out my Victor's Mate story. If not, then thank you for the time that you had to look at this story.
schedule August 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I just want to say thank you to those who reviewed. It's not easy to try and remain true to the character while adding your own spin in, so I'm glad you guys have enjoyed what you've read so far!
person LaSonya
schedule July 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
>:D!!! Omg! I can't wait to see what happens next!! *bounces around room* And your OC intrigues me. :)
schedule June 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
More, more, more!!! Your writing style is refreshing. You use correcr grammar, and it is truly a soothing balm. Please continue, as I am beyond excited to see what happens with dear Verg, and your surprisingly deep and thought out OC. Keep it up!!!
person Vicky
schedule November 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is quite an interesting story. I like full, wordy ones like these. I see you have an OC in here as well. I don't want to sound bitchy or anything, but I hope she doesn't turn out to be some raging (insert whatever kind of mystical creature that's stronger than the twins) type of thing. I can't tell you how many stories have flat character portrayals. But so far it seems like she has a gritty past. Can't wait to see more.