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April 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Huh. First page is all bold.
I've always thought you were a good writer, but the subject matter in your other stories (particularly the big one, you know the one I mean) turned me right off. So, I'm glad that this new one's one I like on that score.
OCs are a mixed bag, but Kanen doesn't seem TOO annoying. Not all that memorable either, but I'll take what I can get.
Interested in seeing where things go from here, and I'll offer criticism as I see fit.
Also, the whole first page is bold. Just thought you ought to know, in case you don't already.
I've always thought you were a good writer, but the subject matter in your other stories (particularly the big one, you know the one I mean) turned me right off. So, I'm glad that this new one's one I like on that score.
OCs are a mixed bag, but Kanen doesn't seem TOO annoying. Not all that memorable either, but I'll take what I can get.
Interested in seeing where things go from here, and I'll offer criticism as I see fit.
Also, the whole first page is bold. Just thought you ought to know, in case you don't already.