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for The Mullhollandson Pact

by ScarletVenus

person Mind Wave
schedule March 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see this is not dead. A very hot couple of chapters. I don't get the whole memory erasing thing but I'll wait to see.
person Anonymous
schedule March 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and all the rest. Please update them all.
schedule May 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh...wow.
Things just got really hot.
person Dformal
schedule April 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
well this is interesting, very interesting indeed. shadow makes an appearance and takes the jewel thief for a ride, and now the rest of the boys mysteriously go missing putting a hole in the girls plans. could they have caught wind of what they were planning to do and are hiding out somewhere? or are they planning something for the girls that requires them to come searching for them?
whatever it is please keep up the good work, i'd like to see more.
person Anon
schedule January 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter.
person Anon
schedule November 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE THIS SOON!!!
schedule October 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
"Then consider this marriage training 101." Rouge laughed, "Lession 2 will be how to fix him a sandwich."

I can see it now.

Knuckles: Tikal, this sandwich dosen't have turkey in it! *Smashes Sandwich* Freaking get it right, you son of a ****!

Seriously, this whole thing is working out much, MUCH better for Rouge then I ever expected it to. No surprise that Bunny joined right in, and Blaze...naughty naguhty.
I am amazed at how Tikal found a way around her 'religious' side. Whatever lets you sleep at night. Sally is still WAY to uptight, but I just KNOW that will be toned down!

ANd above all else, that chapter, was, HOTTTTTTT!!!!!!!
person John
schedule September 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this fanfiction a lot, please finish it.
schedule September 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This story is quite a treat. I'm loving how all of the females are just opening up to a totally other world. Boy, when things go boom real shortly here, they're going to go off big time.
person verifiaman
schedule August 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ah that was a funny ending