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I love the first chapter it was very good plus the fact sindel got the business lol but seriously it was excellent id be more then happy to help with future chapters also in the secon chapter millena gets her moith restored to normal and she begs to live in the palace

This story is getting very interesting. I like it thus far but I'm hoping you update more frequently.

Please update soon.

Good story so far.

Hope you update it soon.

Good story so far. Hope you update soon.

Awesome story so far. Hope the next chapter involves Mileena. Please update soon!

I must admit this was actually very well written. I'm curious as to the direction this will be heading, especially if Scorpion confronts Mileena. Great work.

==Also if Scorpion's clan is restored then his wife and son would also be alive and so why no mention of them or the fact that he just left them like some kind of deadbeat? That's something I don't get unless you completely forgot that he had a family of his own (one of the main reasons I thought it was odd putting him at the star for this)==

If you read carfully, his clan (and family) never were brought back to life, only their souls were no longer enslaved, and they could finally rest in peace in heaven.

Anyways I REALLY liked this. Scorpion is one of my favorites, and I'm glad to see him having a more peaceful role for once compared to all the shit he went through in all of the games story.

Please continue it, I really would like to see more

Nicely done, but I agree with the first reviewer; the ending was bit rushed. But all in all, decent work.

I like it. Can't wait for the next one.

Well it's okay although Scorpion is a very odd choice for this kind of story, mostly it was written well but for some reason you rushed through the ending there as soon as you got to the actual sex part the nice flow you had going went out the window and you just rushed through it all way too quickly. Also if Scorpion's clan is restored then his wife and son would also be alive and so why no mention of them or the fact that he just left them like some kind of deadbeat? That's something I don't get unless you completely forgot that he had a family of his own (one of the main reasons I thought it was odd putting him at the star for this)