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March 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME! Keep it going, that was great! Both chapters had a kinky sex scence, i liked it ;D
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March 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
good chapter just wish it wasn't such a wait (im impatient) also cannot wait for when Leaf gets to Misty gym anyway keep it up with the awesome story
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March 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love this story so far, keep up the amazing work I can't wait to see the next chapter, hope it comes soon
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March 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
M8, you know how much of a fan I am, so please, please take this only as theconstructive criticism it is meant to bee. I really don't like this chapter. I really don't leaf and blue should be together at all. I really don't like the idea of that asshat (which is what I have named my rival since gold) getting any. Just my opinion m8.
JMAHWK
JMAHWK
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March 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapter...though may I suggest this Pokemon for Leaf: Eevee.
Since it can evolve into many different types, it helps with ideas, right?
Since it can evolve into many different types, it helps with ideas, right?
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March 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
not saying this as a bad thing, but i was thinking that this would be longer. still good though
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March 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
glad to see that this one has a second chapter. LEaf is one of my favorites to read about
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February 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, really looking forward to seeing you continue this one.
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February 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This stroy reminds me of "Turning Over a New Leaf" by Goombario..... but I'm sure they'lll be very different. P.S Love Leaf stories and I think i'm going to like the mom in story..... :)
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February 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
awesome story can you tell me if Red will show up and have a one sided fight other than that please update soon