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April 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Could they be rescued in this story? Please? This depresses me. Everybody who hurt these girls need to pay.
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April 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for next chapter :D
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April 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh lord. Please tell me that you have plans for this to end well.
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April 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Man I just want these girls to be rescued. They've been through a lot of shit. I might invoke the right of Batman and send him in to get them out.
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He could take those Vorcha and a Turian.
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He could take those Vorcha and a Turian.
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March 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
God dam man... Never knew I needed this story in my life until I just finished this. If the hunch I've got is right, the SB is building that facility so he he can out last the Reapers and have Liara, Shepard and Miranda as sex pets... hope I'm guessing right. Oh the anticipation of what is to come is killing me.
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February 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OH MAN! What a fucking cliffhanger to leave it on! I hope your getting more reviews on the kink meme since AFF doesn't seem to huge in the review department. Might I say this is a pretty spectacular fic? Love all the scenes you've put together, the story, the characters, everything. Love a good rape scene in stories and your descriptions...mmm! Good stuff.
Really want to see where you take this. Happy ending where they escape? Enslaved Ending? Something completely different? I am excited.
Really want to see where you take this. Happy ending where they escape? Enslaved Ending? Something completely different? I am excited.
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February 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I don't review stories often, but as a writer myself, I know how much it can suck to not get feedback, and there had been so little on this one.
I love this story. Any criticism I can think of would be nitpicking because I've enjoyed it so much. I will say, that I hope it has a "happy ending", cause as hot as I find slavery and abuse, I need closure for it as well. I look forward to the rest of this. :)
I love this story. Any criticism I can think of would be nitpicking because I've enjoyed it so much. I will say, that I hope it has a "happy ending", cause as hot as I find slavery and abuse, I need closure for it as well. I look forward to the rest of this. :)
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February 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Actually Liara says azure is "at the lower reaches, near the bottom," not specifically the lower back. So it's up for interpretation of what exactly it is. I always assumed it was slang for vagina but as I said it's vague enough to be something at the lower back or elsewhere.
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February 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Personally by this point in the story I don't get why Liara hasn't been assaulted once, yeah at the start I can see her just watching being a type of mental breaking down but honestly it doesn't really look to be effecting her as much as such a thing should in some ways. I think by this time the Shadow Broker would take her himself at least once or at the very least give her the option to take the places of one or both of them. Given Miranda's little breakdown earlier I think that would fit in with the story by this point.
Also I'm hoping that my feeling that the whole Solvitis is just a whole mind fuck with them as to give them all false hope before it's revealed that he was actually a loyal crew member told to mess with them.
Also I'm hoping that my feeling that the whole Solvitis is just a whole mind fuck with them as to give them all false hope before it's revealed that he was actually a loyal crew member told to mess with them.
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February 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The Azure is an area on the lower back, a cluster of nerves most likely.
Liara states as such during LoTSB.
Liara states as such during LoTSB.