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for Shepard hunts for cunts

by TheMarksman

schedule August 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hope you will continue this story :-) but please no rape
person Da Bomb
schedule June 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Very hot!!! I would love to see how Shepherd resolves this new conflict with Kelly...
person bilbowski77
schedule February 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is freaking hilarious. You need to continue it, hopefully soon. I need to see giant dicked shepard get some cunt.
schedule February 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nice. I'm liking this so far.

Hope you continue with this, because it has a lot of potential.
person Anon
schedule February 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Not bad at all. Surprisingly good, I really hope the author doesn't abandon this story.
person Ryvius
schedule February 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This looks like it could be fun.

My favorites that I would like to see are Tali(#1!), Katsumi, Ashley, and Liara.

Hope to see chapters with 2 or more girls, and with supporting characters as well.
person Leeslane
schedule February 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The writing in general is alright, but the proportions described for Shepard are a bit over the top and the title doesn't really indicate the quality of the story.
schedule February 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM

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person sanguine
schedule February 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow! The title is almost as awesome as the content. Hope to see more of this soon. Would be great to see Shep tossing a few more asari salads, screwing their asses and filling them up with a ton of spooge, like the asari consort. Hopefully a return visit to her will come into play. Or maybe Samara & liara will get some quality time. Keep up the good work!
person DrMadDoc
schedule February 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, this story is awesome.

I have a Tali thing, but I know that working her into a story isn't for everyone. Still, your story is very well written, possibly one of the best on here imho (yeah it's short but you had some good imagery). I look forward to any character you chose to have Shep be with. Looking like Kelly next, so I'm anticipating the next chapter.

Also, liked the detail in the death recollection, even if it was a bit morbid. Just a little something you don't see many authors do.