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for Hurt

by DoveCG

person Hashbard
schedule February 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love it!
Even without knowing the tumblr picture/post, your story manages to convey great emotions. I personally found the fact you didn't mention the reason of Daxter's sadness very professional, an accomplishment of a true writer, for it adds a sense of continuity and manages to stay clear of the trap of the "single vision." The end also leaves much thought matter for the brain...
schedule February 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is awfully sweet. I found the picture that goes with it, and I think you captured the mood perfectly!
person MariMeeko
schedule January 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
AH! ;A; Amazing!

And dammit, I know you were talking to me on Tumblr about doing this but thanks to tumblr's functioning I can't for the life of me find that message and recall what your tumblr name is! UGH.

But anyway, I would love to link this up to my blog and my doodle! I absolutely love it!