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April 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM
How about a writing like "Gym badge for any big cock with a big load"? XD
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April 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM
The only way to deal with a bothering cop
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April 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM
So far, I liked the one with Iris, the most. She was a real slut at heart.
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April 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Bianca is a really a perfect slut! You should use her more ;)
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September 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to review each chapter individually, in chunks of 5 at a time. I hope no one minds!
Chapter 1: Iris is such a lucky little slut, haha. I'd kill to have her job, especially since she gets to find men like Barry on the beach. She should know better than to wake up a man while he's sleeping! She's lucky he only decided to rape her face a little. This whole situation could have been avoided if she had just sucked him off like a good little whore instead of trying to get him to move.
Chapter 2: Now Misty is such an eager little cunt, I love it... one whiff of the stalker's sweaty balls and she's willing to do whatever he wants her to do. Her only mistake is trying to finger herself, but luckily the stalker catches her. Always remember: your pleasure doesn't matter - only his does!
Chapter 3: It must be tough being Officer Jenny. You have to try and keep law and order, while hiding the fact that you're a cock-addicted slut... The fact that Brodie tells her to fuck off multiple times should have been warning enough for her. You can't control a man who doesn't respect you at all! Luckily, she starts to understand her place when he begins to roughly facefuck her. Using her own handcuff against her makes the scene all the better! She'll think twice before trying to arrest someone now. ;)
Chapter 4: Flannery... poor girl. Getting gangbanged by a bunch of men can't be easy. Too much cum, too many cocks. I guess that's what you get when you "accidentally" enter the male sauna!
Chapter 5: Now this one, I love. Bianca is such a needy little slut, and Michael starts out so innocently... But she and the rest of the women on the beach really help to bring out with wild, dominant side. When he pins her face into the sand and just starts to really roughly fuck her throat... God, it's the best. I want to live in a world where any big dicked guy can just walk up and roughly fuck your face and get cheered on by the crowd of people around him.
Well those are my chapter-by-chapter reviews for now. I'll be back soon for the next five!
Chapter 1: Iris is such a lucky little slut, haha. I'd kill to have her job, especially since she gets to find men like Barry on the beach. She should know better than to wake up a man while he's sleeping! She's lucky he only decided to rape her face a little. This whole situation could have been avoided if she had just sucked him off like a good little whore instead of trying to get him to move.
Chapter 2: Now Misty is such an eager little cunt, I love it... one whiff of the stalker's sweaty balls and she's willing to do whatever he wants her to do. Her only mistake is trying to finger herself, but luckily the stalker catches her. Always remember: your pleasure doesn't matter - only his does!
Chapter 3: It must be tough being Officer Jenny. You have to try and keep law and order, while hiding the fact that you're a cock-addicted slut... The fact that Brodie tells her to fuck off multiple times should have been warning enough for her. You can't control a man who doesn't respect you at all! Luckily, she starts to understand her place when he begins to roughly facefuck her. Using her own handcuff against her makes the scene all the better! She'll think twice before trying to arrest someone now. ;)
Chapter 4: Flannery... poor girl. Getting gangbanged by a bunch of men can't be easy. Too much cum, too many cocks. I guess that's what you get when you "accidentally" enter the male sauna!
Chapter 5: Now this one, I love. Bianca is such a needy little slut, and Michael starts out so innocently... But she and the rest of the women on the beach really help to bring out with wild, dominant side. When he pins her face into the sand and just starts to really roughly fuck her throat... God, it's the best. I want to live in a world where any big dicked guy can just walk up and roughly fuck your face and get cheered on by the crowd of people around him.
Well those are my chapter-by-chapter reviews for now. I'll be back soon for the next five!
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September 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This has quickly become one of my favorite stories on this site. I'm not ashamed to admit that the rough treatment shown to the ladies in this story really gets me going. ><
I'm a submissive at heart, so just reading about being pinned down and gagged like that awakens all kinds of things inside of me.
I'm a submissive at heart, so just reading about being pinned down and gagged like that awakens all kinds of things inside of me.
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June 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Would love to see more of Dawn and Iris choking on that cock, otherwise great :D
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February 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You should do a chapter with Delia Ketchum.
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February 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You don't have any periods in your story, other than the ellipses (...), and the ellipses has one too many.
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February 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, not bad, not bad at all.
There are a thing or two that I wished was different, but you gave me what I wanted and I am glad. Though I think you might have forgotten to credit me for the OC. I hope you continue to use Felix in the future.
There are a thing or two that I wished was different, but you gave me what I wanted and I am glad. Though I think you might have forgotten to credit me for the OC. I hope you continue to use Felix in the future.