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person Rillis
schedule April 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Y do Fanfic writers make the plot better than the games?
person Rillis
schedule March 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Its amazing how dark and creepy Pokemon can become when the right mind takes a crack at te story.
person Hydra-Hunter
schedule March 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
nice job, dude. Though I think I can sense some...tension between the two (and not the kind they might be used too)
schedule March 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
only thing I would've liked more about this was if there was more for Wes and Emok

otherwise, another great chapter
schedule March 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yow...she's a wild one, isn't she?
person Rillis Morta
schedule February 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
"I’m a HUGE anal slut"'

Did I ever tell girls who like anal is one of my fetishes? That and pink hair and Neko.... anyways, thats my suggestiong for the seires: A decent amount of anal
schedule February 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
definitely not what i was expecting, but still pretty good. only a few mistakes this time :)
schedule February 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hey m8,
Great stuff as always. Cant wait to see youre plans for when the battle tower is actually finished ;)
Also, I would like to request that rui use those sexy feet of hers as much as she uses the rest of her slut-tastic body.
Cant wait for chapter 4!
JMAHWK
person Drake
schedule February 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nice adam. wes sounds familur.....
person ZaWarudo
schedule January 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
For a lemon, the story's impressive. Keep it up!