rate_review Reviews

I seriously never understood how stupid the evil organizations in the pokemon games could be, I mean, if they are able to be beaten by a single, or in this case two, kids, they had no business with their evil plots. On the plus side, this chapter was awesome, and the two sluts most definitely deserved what they got. Again, I hate how cocky the bad guys are about being unstoppable until you crush them. But it never satisfied me to just beat them, I wanted to physically abuse them back. You are helping me quell those wants ;)
JMAHWK

Good dude, keep up the sexy work!

you never disappoint with the lemons ;)

Rui is keeping her promise?

Good. Very good.

I haven't read much of this, but what I have read has been pretty goddamn good

You know, you write an interesting type of story. Pretty smutty, but that's more or less what people expect coming here, yet you don't completely abandon the plot either. So far this story is fairly entertaining, but you contradicted yourself in this second chapter. When Rui got cornered by the Shadow Pokémon she noted she would have tried Poképhilia sooner had she known how good it felt, yet when she told Wes her story she mentioned she got kicked out/left after a round with the family Gallade. So she should have already known, and already been into Poképhilia long before Makuhita and Croconaw.

You have been gifted with the ability to take the story from pretty much anything, turn it into an xxx porno, and still have it make sense andnbe hot as fuck. Keep it up m8
JMAHWK

*reads wow flexible Rui is: Nose bleed*

Again love how you balance sex & story, rare quality in multi-chapter lemons.

P.S.
Damn! Wish my Girlfriend was that flexible!

The last part...

Did someone give you any inspiration by any chance? Nudge nudge etc.

Still well written as usual, and follows the game well enough.

- Looking forward to whatever story/chapter you have planned next.

......i'm gonna be honest, I thought this one was just okay
I like it, but.... its not a favorite of mine :\