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July 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. Can't wait to see what you do with Suicune
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April 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
God I am loving this so far, the last author I read who wrote this kind of stuff that had more than sex was that Johto Heat story on FF. though that Author was a greenhorn, the characters he came up with had as much personality as the ones you use. Plus the sexual use of attacks outside of Vine Whip, and the humor helped his(?) story stand out amongst other poke-smut before it was pulled, while yours stand out for the great plot. I hope you keep up the great work. I will keep following your stories, so expect to hear from me again.
before I forget, is it possible to have Ferma show up again, mainly because she is constantly demanding that her new "masters" Rui and Wes to once again "punish" her, and have Rui use one of those special strapons that can cum with enough pressure?.
before I forget, is it possible to have Ferma show up again, mainly because she is constantly demanding that her new "masters" Rui and Wes to once again "punish" her, and have Rui use one of those special strapons that can cum with enough pressure?.
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March 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Although serious, another great chapter
Only keep the slight English speaking for the other two dogs
Only keep the slight English speaking for the other two dogs
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January 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Rui'll be lucky not to end up with a Makuhita egg in her stomach XP
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January 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This chapter is quite possibly my favorite you have ever written. Just the fact that you had the eveelutions in it was awesome, but the way you used them, it really got to my inner furry. Thank you. Thank you so much. Im sorry this review was so late, but seriously, this one kicked ASS
Jomahawk
Jomahawk
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December 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OK, the Pokemon turning into Antrho wasn't something I saw coming, but it was interesting. Please continue.
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November 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
When you said you were adding. A lemon with Umbreon and Espeon, I thought you were gonna focus on them
This was still an interesting surprise though
This was still an interesting surprise though
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October 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm with Wes and saying that Rui is a weirdo.
Though I am still curious on the idea of the Mightyena Shadow Pokemon being a bit more...violent than the other ones, given that he IS a dog and all ^^; But that's just a small idea.
Though I am still curious on the idea of the Mightyena Shadow Pokemon being a bit more...violent than the other ones, given that he IS a dog and all ^^; But that's just a small idea.
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October 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well, im not gonna say that was my favorite chapter from you (although I am very biased after chapter 10 of lust green.) I will say that this was up to your usual standard of hot lemon action, and im glad someone finally found a good use for rain dance ;)
Lolking forward to chapter 11 m8!
JMAHWK
Lolking forward to chapter 11 m8!
JMAHWK
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October 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That wa an interesting lemon ;)