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How about the next few chapters be between Ash and Hope,Faith,and Charity? Those three girls who are Professor Ivy's assistants. Then the next chapter after those is between Ash and all three of them.

Funny storys i like them.

Can you add Alba (ger), Aka パンジー (Pansy), aka Alexa (en). Or her sister?

Awesome lemons, love the variety of partners and styles. I've got a request for one of the few girls you've missed though - Clair. She can fit in the gym leader stripper series, that tight bodysuit and Dragonair are begging for a striptease.

Hi, some nice little scenes your got here. Like the way you portray the characters and the different situations you put them in, their either in character and I could see them behaving that way or their gloriously out of character and its fun to read.

Would love to see a chapter or two with Hilda and/or Rosa from Black/White Black/White 2

You keep using the same characters and situations over and over again and it is getting really boring. Why don't you try someone different for once?

i Love your story so far. Ive read it off and on I can only read so much at once its just so good XD. If you are taking requests I was hoping you could do a chapter with Iris using her ass to hotdog ash or maybe have ash give her A rimjob? I'm more into ass content, and Iris has the best one in my opinion so I would love to see that if you can.

You may want to delete one of the Iris stories, seeing how you have the same one back to back.

Great writing as always, Anyways are you going top use any of the XY girls in you're series. If you do can write one with Serena. I have a few idea that might help if your intered.

1; Based off XY 7, After watching Ash competing in the rhyhorn race, Serena can't help but feel turned on by Ash's performance. After the race Serena could ride Ash like a rhyhorn or something along those lines.

2: Just use the high school setting. Something about serena having a crush on ash and somewhere in between she is being subjected to bullying and her crush comes to the rescue. End of story ash bangs her.

Either way i hope you can write an Ash and Serena

maybe you could do Serena or Bonnie next.

Lucky Ash, he's fucked practically every single woman in the pokemon series that is hot! Who hasn't he fucked female wise? Hm... I don't think he's fucked Flannery, Roxanne or any of the female elite 4 yet.