rate_review Reviews

Sexy stuff

Alright I guess. Didn't like the use of the word pussy seemed way to crude. And to much sex talk from ysolda.

@anon: Well, sorry for screwing up with female reproductive organ anatomy. Either way, I wanted the werewolf sex to be hot.

Not bad. Certainly compelling enough read, but I was expecting a bit more of the mindless animal than we got. My main beef with this fic is you broke her. Literally. Breaking through the cervix is neither sexy nor pleasurable. It's painful and life-threatening. I'm sure there's some person out there who gets off on that level of pain, but they wouldn't for long considering they would bleed out.

Wow! I don't even like rapefics but this one is excellent. Truley great! The sex is descriptive and passionate and every bit of detail is wrtten out to were you seem to feel it. Good work!

Whoa amazing stuff, utterly freaking but good nonetheless. I am surprised she didn't break I mean 2 feet that's ungodly! But he is a werewolf so it makes sense.

@O_O: Lol, that was a bit of a mistake from finishing up this one-shot at 2AM. 2 feet is definitely too long, so I shortened it a bit. =/