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December 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awwww. You said you got no reviews last week. That sucks. I was too busy to review, but your stuff is neat. Finished all your stuff on ff.net and followed you here. I wanna know what becomes of the brothers, broken little things that you have turned them into. The abuse is graphic and I won't say I love reading it, but I don't mind it. You have the story going this dark, I want to see what happens to them next. It cant be bad forever, and if it can be, then at least it will be entertaining if you are the one telling the story. I also haven't forgotten Nates kiss with Brightwing. I want to know if they will ever see one another again. Curiosity will keep me checking back. Hope to see more.
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December 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm so sorry! I had wanted to review but forgot (between everything I had to do here at home; i've been running crazy!)
About what you wondered, yes, I too have read your story Borthers, and it kills me to see them both suffering again after all they had to go through! So sad! (I read all of your other stories too, and I must tell you that they are stunning <3 )
Regarding this new chapter; Pheeeeww, I waited so long for this one (or so it seemed)!
I checked as often as I remembered and you seemed to have disappeared!
I'm glad you didn't, and I hope that everything is ok :) I like the turn you gave, Deni helping him in that way ! Wasn't expecting that at all :O
Pleaaaasee I beg of you, if It isn't much to ask, write more!!!! Your stories are so engaging that just one chapter seems so little D: I adore your style and everything <3
Greetings and keep up the excellent work! :)
About what you wondered, yes, I too have read your story Borthers, and it kills me to see them both suffering again after all they had to go through! So sad! (I read all of your other stories too, and I must tell you that they are stunning <3 )
Regarding this new chapter; Pheeeeww, I waited so long for this one (or so it seemed)!
I checked as often as I remembered and you seemed to have disappeared!
I'm glad you didn't, and I hope that everything is ok :) I like the turn you gave, Deni helping him in that way ! Wasn't expecting that at all :O
Pleaaaasee I beg of you, if It isn't much to ask, write more!!!! Your stories are so engaging that just one chapter seems so little D: I adore your style and everything <3
Greetings and keep up the excellent work! :)
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December 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
aaaand again my review was cut short for some strange reason! I apologize for the 'double post' .
here is the rest:
Regarding this new chapter; Pheeeeww, I waited so long for this one (or so it seemed)!
I checked as often as I remembered and you seemed to have disappeared!
I'm glad you didn't, and I hope that everything is ok :) I like the turn you gave, Deni helping him in that way ! Wasn't expecting that at all :O
Pleaaaasee I beg of you, if It isn't much to ask, write more!!!! Your stories are so engaging that just one chapter seems so little D: I adore your style and everything !
Greetings and keep up the excellent work! :)
here is the rest:
Regarding this new chapter; Pheeeeww, I waited so long for this one (or so it seemed)!
I checked as often as I remembered and you seemed to have disappeared!
I'm glad you didn't, and I hope that everything is ok :) I like the turn you gave, Deni helping him in that way ! Wasn't expecting that at all :O
Pleaaaasee I beg of you, if It isn't much to ask, write more!!!! Your stories are so engaging that just one chapter seems so little D: I adore your style and everything !
Greetings and keep up the excellent work! :)
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December 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay you updated! I'm almost ashamed to admit I've been checking back every day to see if you had, haha.
The dark tone definitely isn't pushing me away! I didn't leave you a review last chapter to keep from looking, hmm, stalker-ish? xD Anyway, I have to say when I first found this story, I definitely didn't expect it to take this turn from Brothers - which is definitely not a bad thing. Hopeless moments always do make the happier moments all the sweeter.
Thanks for the awesome story! Glad to see you're getting more hits this time.(:
The dark tone definitely isn't pushing me away! I didn't leave you a review last chapter to keep from looking, hmm, stalker-ish? xD Anyway, I have to say when I first found this story, I definitely didn't expect it to take this turn from Brothers - which is definitely not a bad thing. Hopeless moments always do make the happier moments all the sweeter.
Thanks for the awesome story! Glad to see you're getting more hits this time.(:
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November 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh and I thought I hated Vance in the first story! Ugh. Poor Nathaniel... and poor Foster.
Can't wait to see what else you've got in store for us!
Can't wait to see what else you've got in store for us!
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October 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh! Nice chapter! Now you make me hate Vance again! Oh my... save Nathaniel , make things lighter for him !! I feel so sorry for him D: gaaahh !
I'm sorry to hear it was a rough week; hope it wasn't too much though :(
Good luck and keep up the great work ! Cheers!
P.s I'll be waiting for more updates!!
Are you planning on making this story as long as the others you've written? Just curious to know!
I'm sorry to hear it was a rough week; hope it wasn't too much though :(
Good luck and keep up the great work ! Cheers!
P.s I'll be waiting for more updates!!
Are you planning on making this story as long as the others you've written? Just curious to know!
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October 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You're welcome! I love reviewing you 'cause I love your stories!!!
I really enjoyed this new chapter; specially the dream/ flashback about what happenned to
the family <3
oh my, I absolutely adore Nathaniel D: you make me feel so sorry for him!!
haha I must confess that at times I kind of enjoy Vance's mind games with Nathaniel; being nice towards him and at the next second going all mad at him.
I'll be looking forward for next weekend :D Best of wishes, keep up the great work :)
I really enjoyed this new chapter; specially the dream/ flashback about what happenned to
the family <3
oh my, I absolutely adore Nathaniel D: you make me feel so sorry for him!!
haha I must confess that at times I kind of enjoy Vance's mind games with Nathaniel; being nice towards him and at the next second going all mad at him.
I'll be looking forward for next weekend :D Best of wishes, keep up the great work :)
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October 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh my, I absolutely adore Nathaniel D: you make me feel so sorry for him!!
haha I must confess that at times I kind of enjoy Vance's mind games with Nathaniel; being nice towards him and at the next second going all mad at him.
I'll be looking forward for next weekend :D Best of wishes, keep up the great work :)
ps: I'm sorry I don't know what happenned! I sent the review and only half of it appeared ! strange..
haha I must confess that at times I kind of enjoy Vance's mind games with Nathaniel; being nice towards him and at the next second going all mad at him.
I'll be looking forward for next weekend :D Best of wishes, keep up the great work :)
ps: I'm sorry I don't know what happenned! I sent the review and only half of it appeared ! strange..
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September 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh I feel honored and glad our reviews cheer you :D
This new chapter made me feel even more sorry for Nathaniel; such
a lovely character that has to suffer through so much! D:
aargh you make me get so involved in your stories! I love them and love your style :D
please keep it up and don't forget about us :3 hehe
cheers!
This new chapter made me feel even more sorry for Nathaniel; such
a lovely character that has to suffer through so much! D:
aargh you make me get so involved in your stories! I love them and love your style :D
please keep it up and don't forget about us :3 hehe
cheers!
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September 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ooow !! I can't believe you are back with more! I love it so far; though I must admit I feel really
sorry for Nathaniel :(
Love the balance between dialogue, descriptions and actions; it gives the story
more dinamism !
keep up the great work and please continue with the story! don't leave us hanging
for too long haha ;)
sorry for Nathaniel :(
Love the balance between dialogue, descriptions and actions; it gives the story
more dinamism !
keep up the great work and please continue with the story! don't leave us hanging
for too long haha ;)