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for Shattered

by Koori

person Tyrion
schedule July 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
YAY you updated. :D Loving the brilliance, as usual. I have to say, Skang seems to be a pretty cool guy... err, I mean orc.

Also, I love that you took a darker direction with Foster and the death knight aspect rather than a "oh we escaped cue the sunshine and daisies" approach. Although I should have expected it to be good, considering the author. (:

I honestly thought I reviewed the last chapter, so sorry for that. I promise I'll be more stalker-like in the future. xP

-Tyrion
person lolu
schedule July 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
haha I'm sorry!! I thought I had reviewed you!
how was your trip? I hope you enjoyed it!

Have to say I love reading Nathaniel's PoV ; and yeah! I enjoyed Skang's presence!
Awesome chapter, I'm really glad you updated!

I have to say I adore Nathaniel's determination on never giving up on Foster. Melts my heart D:
Cheers! I'll be waiting for the next chapter :D
person lolu
schedule June 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
wow!! I've been really busy here;
it is great to come back and have not one, but two chapters waiting to be read!!!
and both of them awesome :D
-sorry I couldn't review any sooner!

second honeymoon? that sounds magnificent!!
I hope you have a great time!

I'll be waiting for new updates on this awesome story !!
Good luck, keep up the excellent work; and have lots of fun!!
person Tyrion
schedule June 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You are certainly good with suspense! I swear I was shaking for the first half of that chapter thinking Foster was dead. Then again, he's a death knight... I shouldn't have been surprised! Can't kill the undead that easily.

Also, love the twist with the orcs!

-Tyrion
person Althea
schedule May 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Omg Super excited for poor Nathanial to "wake" up. I have been diligently checking everyday for another update and just realized I hadn't reviewed again yet! Sooo Bring on the chapters!
person lolu
schedule May 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! I've been waiting for this moment for a long time! hahaha
This chapter was indeed SQUEE-tastic for me too! I love it! Damn I love your stories !!!
Poor Nathaniel! Give him a break!! D: hahah
Excellent as usual! I will be waiting for the next chapter :)
I must -shamefully- admit, that I've been checking back almost every day to see if you updated!!
Couldn't wait for what was going to happen (I'm so anxious and curious)
Good luck! :)
person Tyrion
schedule May 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Upon reading this chapter, I was for some reason reminded of the moment back in "Brothers" when Foster and Nathaniel were children, and Nathaniel broke one of Foster's toys. That caused this insane rush of nostalgia to hit me, and I realized that one of the reasons I love this story so much is just that; we've seen Foster and Nathaniel go from toddlers to warriors and everything in between. I feel that the connection built between readers and characters is one of the key elements that makes a story great, and you have done a brilliant job in that aspect.

I'm sorely tempted to go back and reread the entirety of the first story, now! I only wish I had the time to do so.

That said, I'll admit I was also guilty of a ridiculous grin at the end of this one, even if I felt somewhat guilty for it! I can't help but feel sorry for both Nathaniel and Foster. Still, loved the chapter (do I even need to say that anymore, or have we just established that all of your updates are brilliant?)

Eagerly waiting for an update (as per usual,)
-Tyrion
person Althea
schedule April 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Omg! I was so excited when I checked this story the other day on my phone and there was an update! Omg keep them coming I cannot wait to see how it ends and I will continue to stalk you until then!!
person lolu
schedule April 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
hahaha so stalking isn't so bad after all!
I love how the story is going; and I found myself smiling wickedly at the end too.. Poor Nathaniel , it felt so wrong; yet in Brothers I had -secretly cough cough- wished for something to happen between them! But now It just seems so... awkward.

Awh; your chapters always want to make me read more, and more!! the wait for new ones seems so long! (no pressure inteded though) haha

I really want Foster to say those words! come one! D: Speak damnit! Poor Nathaniel!
As always, awesome chapter; I really hope you can post sooner hehe ;)
Best of luck!

person Cutiepie
schedule April 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love your stories. Can't wait to read the next chapter.