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for Shattered

by Koori

person Althea
schedule December 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG Best Chapter Yet! I love you and I can't wait for the next one!
person lolu
schedule December 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
what!!! what!?!?! Nathaniel spoke Foster's name what jgnhjknfg
I wasn't expecting that at all D:

Suspense is killing me!!
Awesome update as always!
Keep up the great work!,
and Merry Christmas to you too! Happy New year as well :3
person Tyreon
schedule December 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh shit! I wondered if Pa would eventually find out but I didn't expect it so soon!

You sure know how to keep us in suspense. Now we get to wait for the next chapter, gah!

I'll be waiting patiently (or not so patiently) for an update, as usual. :P

-Tyreon
person Demmu
schedule December 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS SUCH A GREAT UPDATE!!! Terror, tension, fatherly love, and more FOSTER!!! Koori I swear when this story is over I'm gonna chain you in my basement and force you to write fanfiction all day!!! :D
person Demmu <Stalker of Koori>
schedule December 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
IT'S BEEN SIX DAYS I CANT TAKE IT ANYMORE
person Demmu
schedule December 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
YAY everytime you update it's like Christmas!!!!! I love seeing Nathaniel have to squirm!!! Very lovely update and soooooo looking forward to the next one. OK but I'll totally be your surrogate ANY TIME :)
person Tyreon
schedule December 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It's about time poor Nathaniel gets some R&R time! And uh oh, James Clark... I remember him from my leveling days, ha! I can bet he'll be trouble in the future.

I knew Pa would find a way to help. The way he and Ma support Nathaniel is heart warming. I just love it.

Loving this update speed, by the way! :P Always with the great work, eh?

Already waiting eagerly for more!

-Tyreon
person lolu
schedule December 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Aww, poor Nathaniel!
I love the sweet feeling I got from this chapter D: so much love!

Can't believe I must wait another week for an awesome update!!!
Cheers! Keep up the excellent work!

p.s: I think I asked this before; but I am eager to know! How long will this story be compared to Brothers (as in amount of chapters) :)
person Tyreon
schedule December 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awh yeah Pa to the rescue! :D I just have to wonder what he'd think if he knew Foster's part in all this.

Brilliant as usual and can't wait for more. (: Thanks for the update!
person Demmu
schedule December 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOooooo it ended way too soon!!! I'm so excited the truth is finally coming out (and the pending ANGST on Nathaniel's part)!!! LOVING Thomas (the elder) by the way, he's such a warm character! Koori, please gay marry me!!